视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct pronunciation/grammar issues (e.g., plural forms and article use).

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember beautiful moments. For example, I often take pictures of sunsets and cityscapes so I can look back on them later.

建議: Avoid short fragmented sentences and repetition. Give a single clear reason, then expand with specific details and a linking word. Use correct adjective/adverb forms and plural/singular agreement.

範例: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery. For instance, the bright fields, trees, and open skies make photos look more vibrant and peaceful.

建議: Fix grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid hesitations. Provide a clear topic sentence, a reason, and one concrete example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because my country has many tall buildings and few natural sights. For example, when I travel abroad I can photograph mountains and beaches that I rarely see at home.

× Yes I do, it can help me memorize many beautiful moment.

✓ Yes I do; it can help me memorize many beautiful moments.

The sentence has two issues: 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match 'many' (singular/plural issue but listed under plural as part of noun form), and the clause punctuation needs clarity. Use a semicolon or period to separate the independent clauses. Also 'memorize' is acceptable but 'remember' is more natural. Suggestion: 'Yes, I do; it can help me remember many beautiful moments.'

× I prefer rural areas because. Because it is more bright and more natural element in the picture.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are brighter and have more natural elements in the picture.

The original has a sentence fragment ('because.') and repetition of 'Because'. Also 'more bright' should be 'brighter' (comparative adjective) and 'more natural element' is incorrect—use plural 'elements' and restructure to match subject (rural areas -> they). Combine into one complete sentence: 'I prefer rural areas because they are brighter and have more natural elements.'

× I prefer view in other countries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries.

'View' should be plural 'views' to mean scenery in general. Also use 'in other countries' is correct; optionally add 'the' before 'other countries' only if referring to specific countries. Here plural noun form matches the meaning.

× In my countries there is so many building that I can I cannot see any natural sight.

✓ In my country there are so many buildings that I cannot see any natural sights.

Several errors: 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' unless the speaker has multiple countries, 'there is' must agree with the plural 'buildings' so use 'there are' (there be issue / subject-verb agreement), 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'many', remove duplicate 'I can I cannot' leaving 'I cannot', and 'natural sight' should be plural 'natural sights' or more naturally 'natural scenery'. The corrected sentence: 'In my country there are so many buildings that I cannot see any natural scenery.'