视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (plural/singular, verb forms, articles), and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Limit to 3–4 short sentences. Replace vague phrases ("different view", "sell them with friends") with precise vocabulary ("scenes", "share them with friends").

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because it helps me remember special moments. For example, when I travel I often take pictures of sunsets and mountains and keep them on my phone. I also share my favourite photos with friends after a trip.

建議: Improve clarity and correctness. Give a clear direct answer (urban or rural), correct word choice ("views", "tears" -> probably "trees"), and use linking words to explain reasons. Produce 2–3 coherent sentences with specific details (types of scenery, activities you do).

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy open fields and rows of trees. When I visit the countryside I can relax, breathe fresh air and take long walks along quiet lanes.

建議: Be precise and correct grammar. Give a clear preference statement, then add a specific reason and one contrast using a linking word (e.g., "however"). Avoid incorrect or strange words ("excrement", "fearful"). Use descriptive adjectives ("peaceful", "scenic") and mention a specific place or quality.

範例: I generally prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and are connected to my memories. For example, the peaceful mountain near my hometown is scenic and not very crowded. However, I also enjoy views abroad sometimes because they offer different landscapes and cultures.

× I like taking picture of different view because it's help me remember places and moment.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places and moments.

Plural nouns and verb agreement: 'picture' and 'view' should be plural (pictures, views) because taking multiple items is implied. 'It' refers to plural 'pictures', so use 'they'. 'Help' must agree with plural subject: 'they help'. Also 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match general meaning.

× For example, I opened the photo of sunset and mountain when I travel and I usually keep them on my phone and sometimes sell them with friends.

✓ For example, I open photos of sunsets and mountains when I travel; I usually keep them on my phone and sometimes share them with friends.

Tense consistency and word choice: Use present simple 'open' to match habitual action ('when I travel'). 'Photo' and nouns should be plural: 'photos', 'sunsets', 'mountains'. 'Keep them on my phone' is fine. 'Sell them with friends' is incorrect word choice; likely 'share them with friends' fits the context.

× Well, I prefer few in rural areas because they are beautiful and I like seeing fields and tears.

✓ Well, I prefer views in rural areas because they are beautiful and I like seeing fields and trees.

Word choice and plurality: 'few' is incorrect here; use 'views'. 'Tears' is a wrong word; context requires 'trees'. Ensure plural forms for general statements.

× For example, when I visit the country countryside I will I can relax and take long walk in the air feel face here.

✓ For example, when I visit the countryside I can relax and take long walks in the fresh air.

Redundant and incorrect words removed: 'country countryside' is repetitive; keep 'countryside'. 'I will I can' is ungrammatical; use 'I can' for ability. 'Take long walk' needs plural 'take long walks'. 'Air feel face' is distorted; correct phrase is 'fresh air'.

× Well, I better feel in my own country because they feel familiar and connected to my memories and I know the best places to go.

✓ Well, I feel better in my own country because it feels familiar and is connected to my memories, and I know the best places to go.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'better feel' should be 'feel better' (word order). 'They feel familiar' is incorrect because 'country' is singular; use 'it feels familiar'. 'Connected to my memories' needs a linking verb: 'is connected'. Maintain present tense consistent with general preference.

× For example, I love the mountain excrement near my hometown because it is fearful and not very crowded.

✓ For example, I love the mountains near my hometown because they are peaceful and not very crowded.

Word choice errors: 'excrement' and 'fearful' are incorrect and inappropriate. Likely intended words are 'mountains' and 'peaceful' (or 'beautiful, peaceful'). Ensure plural agreement: 'mountains... they are'. Use appropriate adjectives for scenery.

× But sometimes I also enjoy few approach because they are different.

✓ But sometimes I also enjoy views in other places because they are different.

Incorrect noun and phrase: 'few approach' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'views in other places' or 'different views'. Ensure plural agreement 'they are different' matches plural subject.