视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and precise vocabulary (e.g., "go hiking in the mountains" and "shopping in downtown"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often go hiking in the mountains to photograph landscapes, and I also take photos while shopping in downtown to capture urban scenes.

建議: Make the response more coherent and grammatical. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" or "so") and concrete details. Avoid awkward phrases like "from someone who live" and keep sentences concise.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in a city and enjoy seeing things I haven't seen before. For example, I love quiet countryside scenes and traditional villages, so I often visit rural places to explore their unique charm.

建議: Clarify vocabulary and grammar: use correct words (e.g., "buildings" instead of "bills") and fix repetition and verb forms. Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with an example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I love traveling abroad and seeing different architecture. For example, I find European and American buildings very impressive compared with what I usually see in Thailand.

× I going to travel to many places like hiking in the mountain or storing in downtown.

✓ I am going to travel to many places, like hiking in the mountains or staying in downtown areas.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous ('I am going'). 'Hiking in the mountain' should be 'hiking in the mountains' (plural) to be natural. 'Storing' is incorrect verb; context requires 'staying'. Also add a comma and pluralize 'downtown areas' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I am going to...' for planned future and correct verb choice and number.

× I prefer views in rural areas from someone who live in urban areas for whole life.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas as someone who has lived in urban areas my whole life.

The sentence needs correct tense and structure. Use 'has lived' (present perfect) to indicate an experience up to now. 'Someone who live' should be 'someone who has lived' (subject-verb agreement and tense). Add 'my' before 'whole life' for possessive. Also 'as' clarifies the comparison. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experience and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I love to see the different things that I haven't seen before.

✓ I love to see different things that I haven't seen before.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'different things' because 'different things' is a general plural noun phrase. The tense 'haven't seen before' (present perfect) is correct to express prior experience. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary 'the' in general plural statements.

× I think rural areas have their own charms, so I love to explore it.

✓ I think rural areas have their own charms, so I love to explore them.

Pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'rural areas'; use 'them' for correct plural pronoun agreement. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× I prefer bills in other countries because I'm I'm the person who love to travel abroad and because I live in Asia like Thailand, so the view from Europe or USA is make me impress.

✓ I prefer buildings or sights in other countries because I'm the kind of person who loves to travel abroad, and because I live in Asia, like Thailand, the views from Europe or the USA impress me.

Multiple issues: 'bills' is the wrong noun—likely 'buildings' or 'sights'. Remove duplicated 'I'm'. Use 'the kind of person who loves' for natural expression and 'loves' for third person singular agreement with 'who' referring to 'I' in this construction. 'I live in Asia like Thailand' needs punctuation and 'like' should be 'such as' or include commas; changed to 'like Thailand' with comma. 'the view from Europe or USA is make me impress' is incorrect: use plural 'views', include article 'the USA', and correct verb to 'impress me'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, fix subject-verb agreement, remove duplication, and use natural collocations ('impress me').