视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a reason. Correct grammar (e.g., remove extra prepositions and choose accurate words). Use linking words if adding details.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and early-morning scenes because the light then is warm and creates strong colors. I also like photographing night scenes to capture city lights.

建議: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Replace awkward phrases (e.g., “According to me”) with natural expressions (“I prefer”). Explain why with specific details and linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example”). Avoid vague words like “oldness” and “ordinary.”

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and timeless. For example, I enjoy photographing old farmhouses and winding country roads, which often have interesting textures and fewer people to distract from the scene.

建議: Give a clear reason and use correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like “as unusually” or “keep my countries away.” State a specific reason (e.g., familiarity, cultural connection) and support it with an example. Keep the answer concise and coherent.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel a strong cultural connection to them. For example, I like photographing local coastal towns that remind me of childhood visits and where I can capture traditional architecture and daily life.

× Yeah, I like it very much of taking pictures of different views like sunset, morning and the darkness.

✓ Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views very much, such as sunsets, mornings, and night scenes.

The phrase 'like it very much of taking' misuses 'of' and word order. Use 'like taking' (verb + -ing) to express enjoyment of an activity. Also pluralize 'sunset' and 'morning' to 'sunsets' and 'mornings' and replace 'the darkness' with 'night scenes' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of different views very much.'

× According to me, I prefer in rural areas because I like the oldness of the pictures and mostly the rural areas contains ordinary pictures.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like the aged look of the pictures, and rural areas mostly contain ordinary scenes.

'According to me' is unnatural; say 'I prefer'. 'Prefer in rural areas' incorrectly uses a preposition; prefer takes a noun directly. 'Oldness' is awkward; use 'aged look'. 'Rural areas contains' has a subject-verb agreement error and wrong number: 'areas' (plural) requires 'contain' — this falls under modal/verb usage and subject-verb agreement; corrected to 'contain'. Also 'ordinary pictures' improved to 'ordinary scenes' for clarity.

× I prefer view in my own country because as unusually I think so keep my countries away better than others.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because, unusually, I feel my country is better than others.

The sentence has multiple problems: 'prefer view' should be 'prefer views' (singular/plural agreement). 'my countries' is incorrect; should be 'my country'. The phrase 'as unusually I think so keep my countries away better than others' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'unusually, I feel my country is better than others' to convey intended meaning. Suggest simplifying and using correct singular/plural forms.