视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains odd expressions (“keep them in my hat”, “wash them”) and hesitation. Be direct, use a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant metaphors, and give specific reasons with a linking word. Aim for 2–3 well-structured sentences and reduce filler words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places I visit. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes so I can look back on the colours and details later. Also, pictures help me share my experiences with friends.

建議: Your answer directly states a preference and gives a reason, which is good. Improve by using clearer sentence structure, correct plural/singular forms, and a linking word to connect ideas. Add a specific example of an urban view you like to make it more vivid.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because cities often have impressive architecture and well-maintained public spaces. For example, I like photographing historic buildings and modern plazas, which show a lot of detail and colour. Moreover, urban views often change with light and activity, making them interesting to capture.

建議: Your answer communicates enthusiasm but contains awkward tense use and repetition. Use correct tenses (e.g., 'I have never been'), avoid filler, and expand with a concrete detail about what you expect to see abroad. Use a linking phrase to connect reasons.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I have never travelled abroad and I would be excited to see different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would love to photograph snowy winter scenes or traditional architecture that I cannot find at home. This variety would inspire my photography.

× In my opinion, I like taking pictures of different views so I can keep them in my hat.

✓ In my opinion, I like taking pictures of different views so I can keep them in my photo album.

The original sentence uses 'in my hat' which is incorrect and likely intended as a container for photos; this is a vocabulary/word choice issue tied to article errors because 'my hat' makes no sense as a definite container. Replacing with 'my photo album' corrects the noun and removes the article confusion. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns for containers (photo album, scrapbook) and check that articles and nouns make logical sense.

× Other than that I could also keep them as a memory so I could wash them umm in other time.

✓ Other than that, I could also keep them as memories so I could view them at another time.

The original sentence has several structure and word-choice errors: 'keep them as a memory' should be plural 'as memories'; 'wash them' is incorrect verb choice for viewing photos; 'in other time' is ungrammatical and should be 'at another time'. The correction fixes plurality and uses appropriate verbs and prepositional phrase. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the intended action (view, look at, revisit) and use 'at another time' for referring to a different time.

× In my opinion, I do prefer views in urban areas since uh urban areas have many uh different place that is well constructed and also beautiful since they are kept by the uh government.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer views in urban areas since urban areas have many different places that are well constructed and also beautiful because they are maintained by the government.

Problems: unnecessary 'do' in affirmative present preference (optional but awkward here), 'place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'many', and 'kept by the government' is better expressed as 'maintained by the government'. Also replace 'since' duplicate with 'because' for clarity. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb and number agreement (many -> plural noun) and choose precise verbs (maintained) for actions.

× I do prefer views in other countries since I've never been to another country before, so I will be amazed by things that I've never seen.

✓ I prefer views in other countries since I've never been to another country before, so I would be amazed by things that I've never seen.

Issues: unnecessary 'do' in present preference; main grammar issue addressed here is tense/modal: 'I will be amazed' is a future certainty but context expresses hypothetical reaction, so 'I would be amazed' is more appropriate. Also sentence originally mixes tenses; corrected version uses conditional consistent with 'since I've never been...'. Suggestion: match modality and tense to indicate hypothetical feelings (would) rather than definite future (will).

× Other than that, I also love to see new things such as, uh, winter.

✓ Other than that, I also love seeing new things such as winter.

Style and tense: 'love to see' is acceptable but 'love seeing' is more natural when referring to experiences in general; removing filler 'uh' improves fluency. No major grammar error, but present tense consistency and gerund usage make the sentence smoother. Suggestion: prefer gerunds after verbs of preference when speaking generally (enjoy/like/love + -ing).