视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and precise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and give one or two brief supporting reasons. Use linking words if adding details. Avoid vague phrasing like "a many choices"; say "many options."

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because it gives me many options when I want to post on social media. For example, I often take several shots of a sunset from different angles so I can pick the best one later.

建議: Answer directly with a clear preference or explain neutrality concisely. Fix grammar and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid ambiguous phrases like "prefer much staying at home." Provide a short reason or example to support your stance.

範例: I don't have a strong preference between urban and rural views because I usually prefer staying at home. However, when I do go out, I like cityscapes for their lively atmosphere, while I enjoy rural scenes for their peace and fresh air.

建議: Give a direct answer and use correct verb forms and clearer reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, while) and be specific about why you prefer your own country. Avoid literal translations like "I need to have a airplane."

範例: I prefer views in my own country because they are easier to visit and cheaper to reach. For example, I can drive there on the weekend, whereas going abroad would require a flight and more planning.

× Yes, to have a many choices when uploading it.

✓ Yes, to have many choices when uploading them.

The phrase 'a many choices' is incorrect; 'many' does not take the article 'a'. Also 'it' is unclear and should agree in number with 'choices' or the photos, so 'them' is appropriate. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'many' and use a plural pronoun that refers to 'pictures'.

× Not really actually I'm not interested either it's in urban or rural area because I prefer much staying at home.

✓ Not really. Actually, I'm not interested in either urban or rural areas because I prefer staying at home.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect preposition/structure. Use 'not interested in either' to present the alternatives, plural 'areas' to match urban/rural, and remove 'much' which is unnatural here. Also split into two sentences or separate with a comma. Suggestion: say 'I'm not interested in either urban or rural areas' and 'I prefer staying at home.'

× I prefer much staying at home.

✓ I much prefer staying at home.

Placement of 'much' is incorrect. In English, 'much' commonly modifies verbs like 'prefer' and should come before the verb: 'I much prefer staying at home.' Alternatively, 'I prefer staying at home' is natural. Suggestion: move 'much' before 'prefer' or omit it.

× I prepare in our own country because it's already here.

✓ I prefer my own country because it's nearby.

The student used 'prepare' instead of 'prefer' (word choice error) and 'in our own country' is awkward; 'my own country' or 'our country' depends on speaker. 'Already here' is unnatural—'nearby' or 'closer' fits. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference and 'nearby' to express proximity.

× I can go there immediately, not like to other country.

✓ I can go there immediately, unlike going to another country.

The phrase 'not like to other country' is ungrammatical. Use 'unlike' or 'compared to going to another country'. Also 'another country' needs the article 'another'. Suggestion: say 'unlike going to another country' or 'I can go there immediately, which is not the case for another country.'

× I need to have a airplane to go there.

✓ I need to take a plane to go there.

'a airplane' is wrong because 'airplane' starts with a vowel sound and would require 'an' if kept; however, native speakers often say 'take a plane' or 'take a flight.' Also 'need to have' is awkward—use 'need to take' or 'need a plane ticket.' Suggestion: say 'I need to take a plane' or 'I need to fly there.'