视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và chính xác. Hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (picture → pictures, in the big city → in big cities), tránh nói mâu thuẫn (thích chụp cảnh nhưng thích chụp bản thân hơn) mà nên giải thích rõ lý do. Thêm một câu chi tiết hỗ trợ với từ nối để lưu loát (for example, because/so). Giữ tối đa 3–5 câu.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of big cities like Shanghai and New York because their architecture and street life are very photogenic. However, I also like taking selfies sometimes to capture my own memories when I travel.

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại bị lủng củng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ý không rõ. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (I prefer urban areas.), sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể với liên từ (because/so) và ví dụ. Tránh câu mơ hồ như "bring me a few that I'm so rich". Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

範例: I prefer urban areas because they offer more interesting buildings, restaurants and cultural activities. For example, in cities I can visit museums, try different foods and take photos of modern architecture.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng ngôn ngữ kém chính xác (other country altering, medium view). Nên nói rõ chủ đề (I prefer views in other countries.) và đưa lý do cụ thể, kèm liên từ (because/so) và một ví dụ. Chú ý tới số nhiều và tính từ (countries, views, a moderate view). Giữ 2–3 câu.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and modern cityscapes. For instance, I find cities like New York exciting because of their iconic skylines and diverse neighborhoods.

× I enjoy taking picture in the big city such as Shanghai City and New York City, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures in big cities such as Shanghai and New York, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

Use plural 'pictures' for general activity; use no article with plural 'big cities'; proper names don’t need 'City' after famous city names; keep 'a picture of myself' as singular when referring to a single self-portrait.

× I enjoy taking picture in the big city such as Shanghai City and New York City, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures in big cities such as Shanghai and New York, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

The noun 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') when talking about the general activity of taking photos. Also 'big city' should be plural 'big cities' to match 'such as Shanghai and New York'.

× I enjoy taking picture in the big city such as Shanghai City and New York City, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures in big cities such as Shanghai and New York, but I think taking a picture of myself is more interesting.

Use the preposition 'in' correctly with places: 'in big cities' is fine; avoid 'in the big city' when naming multiple cities. Also remove unnecessary 'City' after well-known city names.

× Of course I like urban areas because it's bring me a a few that I'm so rich and it is. It's also modern. That's why I like it.

✓ Of course I like urban areas because they bring me many opportunities and they are modern. That's why I like them.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'urban areas' is plural, so use 'they' and 'bring' not 'it's bring'. Replace 'a a few that I'm so rich and it is' with a clear phrase like 'many opportunities'. Use plural pronoun 'them' for 'urban areas'.

× Of course I like urban areas because it's bring me a a few that I'm so rich and it is. It's also modern. That's why I like it.

✓ Of course I like urban areas because they bring me many opportunities and they are modern. That's why I like them.

The subject 'urban areas' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'bring' and pronouns must be plural 'they/them'. 'It's' (it is) is incorrect for referring to plural noun.

× Of course I like urban areas because it's bring me a a few that I'm so rich and it is. It's also modern. That's why I like it.

✓ Of course I like urban areas because they bring me many opportunities and they are modern. That's why I like them.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases ('a a few that I'm so rich and it is'). Reconstruct the sentence to express the intended meaning: urban areas provide opportunities and are modern.

× I prefer views in other country altering. My city has a medium view but but I think I enjoy view in modern cities such as New York.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. My city has an average view, but I think I enjoy views in modern cities such as New York.

Use plural 'countries' when speaking generally. Use present tense consistent forms; 'has a medium view' is unnatural — use 'has an average view'. Use plural 'views' when speaking generally.

× I prefer views in other country altering. My city has a medium view but but I think I enjoy view in modern cities such as New York.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. My city has an average view, but I think I enjoy views in modern cities such as New York.

'Country' should be plural 'countries' to match general preference, and 'view' should be plural 'views' when talking generally.

× I prefer views in other country altering. My city has a medium view but but I think I enjoy view in modern cities such as New York.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. My city has an average view, but I think I enjoy views in modern cities such as New York.

The phrase 'other country altering' is ungrammatical and unclear. Remove 'altering' and restructure to 'other countries.' Also correct repetition 'but but' and improve adjective choice 'medium' to 'average'.