视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and organize sentences: give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases like "something I like to make everything aesthetic."

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. For example, I often photograph city skylines and coastal sunsets to capture unique colors and moods. I do this because photos help me remember places and share them with friends.

建議: Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons using clear linking words. Correct vocabulary mistakes ("natural pipes" is unclear) and avoid vague or awkward comparisons. Use concise, coherent support (one or two reasons).

範例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of busy streets and modern architecture. In contrast, rural areas attract me for their open fields and quiet nature, which are great for peaceful photos. Therefore, both have merits, but I usually choose cities for variety and detail.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then support with specific examples and clear linking words. Fix grammar ("company country" → "country of origin"; verb agreement) and finish sentences. Avoid repeating phrases and be specific about what you like in each country.

範例: I like views in both my own country and abroad. For instance, my country has beautiful mountains and beaches that feel familiar, while other countries offer different architectural styles and landscapes that broaden my perspective. So I enjoy both for different reasons.

× Yes, I do like taking picture of different views, especially when I am travelling.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I am travelling.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' after 'taking' because 'taking pictures' is the correct collocation when referring to photographing multiple views. Use plural to match the general idea of multiple photos. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures' for photographing scenes.

× Travelling to a very new place for me and I like capturing things, something I like to make everything aesthetic.

✓ Travelling to a completely new place is exciting for me, and I like capturing things to make them look aesthetic.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. 'Travelling to a very new place for me' lacks a verb and subject relationship; replace with 'Travelling to a completely new place is exciting for me.' 'something I like to make everything aesthetic' is ungrammatical; use an infinitive purpose clause 'to make them look aesthetic.' Suggestion: Form a complete sentence with subject and verb and use 'to' plus verb to express purpose.

× I do prefer urban areas but in my view rural areas are not also so bad.

✓ I do prefer urban areas, but in my view rural areas are not so bad either.

The placement of 'also' is incorrect. Use 'either' or 'not so bad either' at the end of the clause for negative contrasts. Also add a comma before 'but.' Suggestion: Use 'not so bad either' to express that rural areas are acceptable as well.

× I like them too.

✓ I like them too.

This sentence is correct; no article error. No change needed.

× The rural areas are full of some natural pipes and whereas urban it is full of good mindset that today's generation have.

✓ The rural areas are full of natural sights, whereas urban areas are full of the progressive mindset that today's generation has.

'Pipes' is likely a wrong word; 'sights' or 'scenery' fits context. 'Some' is unnecessary. 'Whereas urban it is full of' is ungrammatical; use 'whereas urban areas are full of'. 'Good mindset' should be 'a progressive mindset' or 'positive attitudes.' Subject-verb agreement: 'today's generation have' should be 'has.' Suggestion: Use 'sights' or 'scenery' for rural features, ensure parallel structure 'rural areas... whereas urban areas are...' and match verb to singular collective noun 'generation has.'

× I do prefer urban areas but in my view rural areas are not also so bad. I like them too.

✓ I do prefer urban areas, but in my view rural areas are not so bad either. I like them too.

As above, use 'either' at the end of a negative clause instead of 'also' after 'not.' Also include comma before 'but.' Suggestion: Place 'either' correctly and punctuate the compound sentence.

× I actually like the views in both my country and as well as in other countries because I can't compare my company country with others as I like my country.

✓ I actually like the views both in my country and in other countries because I can't compare my country with others since I like it.

Remove redundant 'as well as' after 'both.' 'Company country' is incorrect; use 'country.' Use 'since' or 'because' once to explain reason. Replace 'I like my country' repetition with 'I like it.' Suggestion: Use 'both... and...' without extra 'as well as' and avoid redundant phrases.

× My country also have so many beautiful views like mountains, beaches and other and I also like the.

✓ My country also has so many beautiful places like mountains, beaches, and others, and I also like them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'country' is singular so use 'has' not 'have.' 'Beautiful views' is acceptable but 'places' or 'scenery' is clearer. 'and other' is incomplete; use 'and others' or list items. 'I also like the.' is incomplete; replace with 'I also like them.' Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with singular subject, complete the list properly, and use correct pronoun 'them.'