视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices. Focus on correct grammar (e.g. use "take photos" or "take pictures," use past participles and articles correctly) and concise phrasing.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different scenes because they help me capture memorable moments with my cousins and friends. For example, when we visit the beach or a park I take several photos to remember the day, so I can look back at them in the future.

建議: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and coherent linking words such as "because" or "because of". Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases. Keep to one or two supporting sentences explaining why you prefer that setting.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and city life. For example, I like walking along busy streets to photograph modern buildings and lively cafes, which adds energy and interesting details to my pictures.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or an example. Avoid repeating the same phrase; use synonyms and more precise vocabulary (e.g. "cleaner public spaces," "better-maintained parks"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to structure your response.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I often find their public spaces are better maintained and more diverse. For instance, when I traveled to Japan I noticed clean streets and well-kept gardens, which made sightseeing and photography more enjoyable.

× I like to know pictures of different views because I want capture memorable days with my cousins and my friends.

✓ I like looking at pictures of different views because I want to capture memorable days with my cousins and my friends.

The phrase 'like to know pictures' is incorrect: 'like' followed by a verb meaning 'view' should use 'looking at' or 'seeing' (verb + -ing after 'like' is common). Also 'want capture' is missing the infinitive marker 'to'. Use 'to capture'. Suggestion: use 'I like looking at pictures' and 'I want to capture'.

× So I like taking pictures of properties.

✓ So I like taking pictures of landscapes.

The original sentence is grammatical but 'properties' (buildings/real estate) seems odd in context; 'taking pictures of' correctly uses verb + -ing. If the intended meaning is 'views' or 'scenery', 'landscapes' is clearer. Suggestion: choose a noun that matches 'views'.

× That's my memorable days and I want to see in my future time that I it is a member day for me.

✓ Those are my memorable days and I want to look back in the future and remember them as special days for me.

Multiple issues: plural/singular and unclear pronoun usage. 'That's my memorable days' mismatches singular 'that' with plural 'days' (use 'Those'). 'I want to see in my future time that I it is a member day for me' is ungrammatical and unclear. Rewritten to convey intended meaning: 'look back in the future' and 'remember them as special days'. Suggestion: use clear time expressions and correct pronouns.

× I prefer used in urban areas because urban areas is very pleasant and peaceful and their atmosphere is very nice and beautiful.

✓ I prefer living in urban areas because urban areas are very pleasant and peaceful and their atmosphere is nice and beautiful.

'prefer used in urban areas' is incorrect. Likely intended 'prefer living/being in urban areas' — use present participle 'living'. Subject-verb agreement: 'urban areas is' should be 'urban areas are'. Also avoid redundant adjectives. Suggestion: use 'I prefer living in urban areas' and 'urban areas are'.

× Their environment is very clearly and the fresh air is feel, freshness and many types of words speaking and that I like a Uber in this music.

✓ The environment there is very clean and the fresh air feels refreshing; I also enjoy the local music.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'Their environment is very clearly' uses adjective/adverb wrong—should be 'clean' or 'clear'. 'The fresh air is feel, freshness' is ungrammatical; use 'the fresh air feels refreshing' (verb + adjective). 'many types of words speaking' is unclear; likely 'many kinds of local music' or 'people speaking different languages'. 'I like a Uber in this music' is meaningless; corrected to 'I also enjoy the local music.' Suggestion: choose clear nouns and proper verb forms.

× I prefer used in urban areas because urban areas is very pleasant and peaceful and their atmosphere is very nice and beautiful.

✓ I prefer living in urban areas because urban areas are very pleasant and peaceful and their atmosphere is nice and beautiful.

As above, 'urban areas is' mismatches plural subject 'areas' with singular verb 'is'. Use 'are'. Also 'their' correctly refers to 'urban areas'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement for plural nouns.

× Their environment is very clearly and the fresh air is feel, freshness and many types of words speaking and that I like a Uber in this music.

✓ The environment there is very clean, the fresh air feels refreshing, and I like the local music and the way people speak.

Use of present participle and adjective forms: 'is very clearly' should be 'is very clean' (adjective) or 'is very clear' depending on meaning. 'fresh air is feel' should be 'fresh air feels'. Also restructure list to parallel noun phrases. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure and correct verb/adjective forms.

× I prefer homes in other countries because foreign countries environment is very beautiful and clean.

✓ I prefer homes in other countries because the environment in foreign countries is very beautiful and clean.

'foreign countries environment' misses a preposition or article; correct form is 'the environment in foreign countries'. This is a sentence structure and preposition placement issue. Suggestion: include 'the' and 'in' to show location.

× So I prefer in other countries because other countries keep their environment clean and fresh air is very beautiful in their countries so I prefer other countries.

✓ So I prefer other countries because they keep their environment clean and the fresh air is pleasant there, so I prefer living in other countries.

Awkward and repetitive phrasing; missing articles and incorrect word choice 'fresh air is very beautiful' (use 'pleasant' or 'fresh'). Also repetition 'so I prefer other countries' can be condensed. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use appropriate adjectives for air quality.

× Their environment is very clearly and the fresh air is feel, freshness and many types of words speaking and that I like a Uber in this music.

✓ The environment there is very clean, the fresh air feels refreshing, and I enjoy the local music and conversation.

Present tense verbs need correct forms: 'is feel' is incorrect—use 'feels'. 'is very clearly' mixes adverb/adjective; use 'is very clear' or 'is very clean'. Suggestion: use correct present tense verb forms and appropriate adjectives.