视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar and avoid small errors and redundancy. Use a concise topic sentence, correct verb agreement and prepositions, and vary vocabulary. Limit to 3–4 sentences and replace informal phrases like "clicking pictures" repeated twice. Add one specific example to enrich the answer.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. Although I am an amateur and sometimes my shots are imperfect, I especially like capturing scenes during the golden hour, such as a calm lakeshore at sunset where the light turns the water copper. For instance, last month I photographed a dramatic cloudy sky over the hills and loved how the contrast highlighted the landscape.

建議: Good clear structure and relevant details. To improve further, add a linking word and a specific personal example to make your answer more vivid. Keep sentences concise and avoid slight repetition of ideas.

範例: I prefer rural views because they offer more greenery and natural features like forests and waterfalls. Moreover, the countryside is quieter than crowded cities, so I can relax and unwind; for example, I often hike to a nearby waterfall on weekends to escape the noise and take photos.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference or balance, fix awkward phrasing and redundancy, and use linking words to compare. Be specific about what appeals to you in other countries (e.g. Alpine scenery) and avoid rhetorical questions that sound defensive.

範例: I appreciate views in my own country because it has abundant forests, waterfalls and mountains, but I would also love to see landscapes abroad. For example, I dream of visiting Switzerland for its dramatic Alpine scenery and crystal-clear lakes, which would offer a different type of beauty from what I see at home.

× I am not a professional photographer and most of the pictures I click doesn't look good.

✓ I am not a professional photographer and most of the pictures I click don't look good.

The subject 'most of the pictures' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'don't' instead of singular 'doesn't'. Use correct subject-verb agreement for third person plural subjects. Suggestion: Match the verb form to a plural subject (pictures -> don't).

× I cannot resist from clicking.

✓ I cannot resist clicking.

The verb 'resist' is followed directly by a gerund without the preposition 'from'. 'Resist from doing' is incorrect. Remove 'from' and use 'resist' + gerund. Suggestion: Say 'cannot resist clicking' or 'cannot resist taking photos'.

× I definitely prefer rural areas to urban ones because they offer more greenery and scenic landscapes such as forests and waterfalls.

✓ I definitely prefer rural areas to urban ones because they offer more greenery and scenic landscapes, such as forests and waterfalls.

This sentence is largely correct grammatically; adding a comma before 'such as' clarifies the sentence. The issue is punctuation for clarity rather than a major grammar error, but it fits under preposition/punctuation context here. Suggestion: Use a comma before 'such as' when introducing examples.

× In contrast to crowded cities, the countryside feels more peaceful and alive, so I usually relax and unwind there whenever I can.

✓ Compared with crowded cities, the countryside feels more peaceful and alive, so I usually relax and unwind there whenever I can.

'In contrast to' is acceptable, but 'compared with' or 'in contrast with' are more idiomatic when drawing direct comparisons. This change improves naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'Compared with' for clearer comparison.

× Why prefer views in my country?

✓ Why should I prefer views in my country?

The original sentence omits the subject and auxiliary needed for a proper question. Asking 'Why prefer...' is informal and ungrammatical in this context. Add the subject 'I' and auxiliary 'should' (or 'would') to form a proper question. Suggestion: Use full question form: 'Why should I prefer views in my country?' or 'Why would I prefer views in my country?'.

× I belong to a country which is rich in greenery, forest, waterfalls and mountains.

✓ I belong to a country which is rich in greenery, forests, waterfalls and mountains.

The list mixes singular 'forest' with plural 'waterfalls' and 'mountains'. Use plural 'forests' to maintain parallelism and correctly reflect multiple types of features. Suggestion: Keep nouns in a list parallel in number: 'forests, waterfalls, and mountains'.

× But I also would love to explore the scenes and view views of other countries as well like Switzerland.

✓ But I would also love to explore the scenery and views of other countries, such as Switzerland.

The phrase 'view views' is redundant and 'scenes' is less natural than 'scenery' for landscapes. Place 'also' in a natural position and use 'such as' when giving an example. Remove redundant 'as well' when 'also' is used. Suggestion: Use 'scenery and views' and 'such as Switzerland'; avoid redundancy.

× Switzerland has been one of my dream destinations.

✓ Switzerland has long been one of my dream destinations.

The original is understandable but adding 'long' clarifies duration. Alternatively, 'is one of my dream destinations' is simpler. The issue is stylistic/structure for natural expression. Suggestion: Use 'has long been' or 'is' depending on intended emphasis.