视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ в целом понятен, но звучит немного неестественно из‑за повторов и лишних слов («but that is obvious», дважды «but»). Следует дать более прямой топик‑предложение, добавить одно‑два конкретных примера и связующую фразу. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений, избегайте самоотрезвления и общих фраз.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, although I'm still learning the techniques. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the riverbank to capture the changing colours. I usually try different angles and lighting to make my pictures more interesting.

建議: Хорошая идея и содержание, но есть разговорные заполнители («uh») и несколько неточных форм (например, «take pictures of it»). Лучше назвать предпочтение прямо, привести причину и привести пример, используя связующие слова (for example, because). Уменьшите количество слов‑заполнителей.

範例: I prefer open, rural views because they feel more peaceful and offer wider landscapes. For example, I like photographing fields and mountains outside the city, where I can capture sweeping horizons and natural light.

建議: Ответ честный и уместный, но можно сделать его более кратким и уверенным: начать с основной идеи, затем добавить причину и конкретный пример. Избегайте повторов («somewhere in other places») и длинных вводных фраз («To be honest»), если они не нужны.

範例: I haven't traveled much, so I prefer the views in my own country for now because I'm familiar with them and they are very diverse. For instance, I often visit coastal cliffs and historic towns here, which always offer picturesque scenes.

× When I see a nice view I will take a picture of it.

✓ When I see a nice view I take a picture of it.

The sentence describes a habitual action. In present simple for habitual actions, use the base verb form for plural subjects and I/you/we/they; do not use 'will'. Replace 'will take' with 'take' to correctly express routine behavior.

× As I live in a huge city, I definitely prefer open views and areas uh, but sometimes I enjoy going out uh to see some natural destinations and take pictures of it.

✓ As I live in a huge city, I definitely prefer open views and areas, but sometimes I enjoy going out to see some natural destinations and take pictures of them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'natural destinations' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them' to match the plural noun. Also remove filler 'uh' and add a comma for clarity.

× To be honest, I've been abroad only two times throughout my life, so I cannot say whether I like views more in my own country or somewhere in other places.

✓ To be honest, I have been abroad only twice in my life, so I cannot say whether I like views more in my own country or in other countries.

Use 'twice' instead of 'two times' for natural phrasing. 'Throughout my life' is less natural here than 'in my life'. 'Somewhere in other places' is redundant; use 'in other countries' to match 'abroad' and improve clarity.

× I really enjoy that, but I wouldn't say that I am very good at it. But that is obvious.

✓ I really enjoy it, but I wouldn't say that I am very good at it; that's obvious.

Avoid repeating conjunctions 'but' at the start of consecutive sentences. Use 'it' instead of 'that' to refer back to taking pictures. Combine sentences with a semicolon or conjunction and use contraction 'that's' for natural spoken style.

× When I see a nice view I will take a picture of it.

✓ When I see a nice view, I take a picture of it.

Duplicate entry to emphasize present simple for habitual actions: remove 'will' and add a comma after the subordinate clause for correct punctuation.