视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Pronunciation and grammar need correction and sentences should be more natural and concise. Make a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of beautiful scenery, and when I have free time I often look through them on my phone because they help me relax and remember places I’ve visited.

建議: Make the response more concise and natural. Start with a direct statement, correct article and plural usage, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I prefer urban views. Since I grew up in a rural area, I like cities because they offer diverse architecture and lively streets, so there’s always something new to see.

建議: This answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct preference, correct grammar, and include a specific reason with a linking phrase. Keep it within a few sentences and avoid filler words like “umm.”

範例: I enjoy views from both my country and other countries, but I especially like seeing scenery from abroad because different cultures offer unique landscapes and perspectives that inspire me.

× I really like capture beautiful sceneries and when I have free time I often take my phone out and rewatch these photos.

✓ I really like capturing beautiful scenery, and when I have free time I often take my phone out and rewatch these photos.

ID 8: The verb 'like' is typically followed by a gerund (verb+ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity, so 'capture' should be 'capturing'. Also 'sceneries' is uncountable or usually 'scenery' without plural - use 'scenery'. Added a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'enjoy/like + -ing' and use 'scenery' as the general noun. (grammar_problem_type_id:8)

× To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas more than rural areas because I have grown up in the rural areas, so I want to see more things in urban area.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because I grew up in the countryside, so I want to see more things in urban areas.

IDs 11 and 22: Use the correct comparison pattern 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B'. 'Rural areas' does not need 'the' in 'grown up in the rural areas' — instead say 'grew up in the countryside' for natural English. Also 'urban area' should be plural or 'an urban area' — changed to 'urban areas'. Simplified tense to 'grew up' (past) since the upbringing is completed. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and choose appropriate articles and pluralization. (grammar_problem_type_id:11)

× I really like a watch video about my country beautiful sceneries umm adult other countries has many beautiful too.

✓ I really like watching videos about the beautiful scenery of my country, and other countries also have many beautiful places.

IDs 22 and 26: 'like' should be followed by a gerund 'watching', not the infinitive with 'a' ('a watch video' is incorrect). 'Beautiful sceneries' should be 'beautiful scenery' or 'beautiful places'. Added articles and reworded for clear sentence structure: 'videos about the beautiful scenery of my country' and 'other countries also have many beautiful places.' Suggestion: use 'like + -ing', ensure correct article usage ('the beautiful scenery of my country') and arrange clauses clearly. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)