视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğal ve olumlu ama dilbilgisi ve akış sorunları var. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun, yardımcı cümlelerde nedenini veya nasılını belirtin. Örneğin, 'Yes, I love taking photos.' ile başlayın, ardından 'because' ile sebep ve bir örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca doğru zaman ve yardımcı fiilleri kullanmaya dikkat edin (ör. 'I take many photos', 'It's my hobby').

範例: Yes, I love taking photos because photography is my hobby. For example, I often go for walks with my camera and capture landscapes and street scenes, which helps me relax and improve my skills.

建議: Cevap net ama bazı sözcük hataları ve bağlaç eksikliği var. 'Exactly' yerine doğrudan 'I prefer' ile başlayın ve tercihinizi destekleyen iki kısa sebep verin. Ayrıca doğru kelimeyi kullanın ('rural' yerine 'rural areas') ve bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın.

範例: I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and have cleaner air. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet country lanes and fields where there is less noise and fewer people.

建議: Cevap duygusal ama kelime seçimi ve cümle yapısı sorunlu. 'Pressurize' yanlış; yerine 'prefer' kullanın. Kaçışlı karşılaştırmalar yerine spesifik örnekler verin ve cümleleri birbirine bağlamak için 'because' veya 'for example' kullanın. Ayrıca abartılı genellemelerden kaçının ve bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of beautiful landscapes, such as mountains and coastal beaches. For example, I enjoy visiting the nearby national park where the views are spectacular and unique.

× Am I going to full because it's my hobby?

✓ I do it a lot because it's my hobby.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong verb choice. 'Am I going to full' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'I do it a lot' to describe a habitual action. Suggestion: use subject + do/does for habits and 'a lot' to express frequency.

× I taking many photos.

✓ I take many photos.

The sentence uses 'taking' without an auxiliary, which is incorrect. For simple present habitual actions use the base verb 'take' (with 's' for third person). Suggestion: use 'I take many photos' to indicate a regular activity.

× I prefer roller areas because they are much more peaceful and have clean air.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are much more peaceful and have clean air.

'Roller' is a misspelling of 'rural'. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error rather than grammar. Correct the word to 'rural'. Suggestion: check pronunciation and spelling; 'rural' refers to countryside areas.

× I pressurize in my country because my country has more beautiful landscapes than any other country.

✓ I prefer my country because it has more beautiful landscapes than other countries.

'Pressurize' is the wrong word; the intended verb is 'prefer'. Also, repeat of 'my country' is redundant; use 'it' as a pronoun. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for choices and avoid repeating nouns unnecessarily.

× It's worth then all of them.

✓ It's more beautiful than all of them.

The original sentence uses 'then' instead of 'than' and has incorrect structure 'worth ... all of them'. To compare landscapes, use comparative structure 'more beautiful than all of them'. Suggestion: use 'than' for comparisons and place comparative adjective before the comparison object.