视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and grammatically correct: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetitions, use past tense consistently, and add one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Focus on pronunciation and sentence structure. For example, say when you started and why you take photos now. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I have liked taking photos of scenes since I was a child. For instance, I always carry my phone and take pictures when I visit new places so I can remember them. I especially enjoy photographing interesting buildings and landscapes because they bring back good memories.

建議: Give a clear preference or say you like both with reasons. Use linking words (however, on the other hand) and avoid unclear vocabulary (e.g., 'communist' is incorrect here). Provide specific contrasts between urban and rural views and a short reason for each. Speak in complete sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but for different reasons. Urban scenes interest me because of the architecture and busy streets, while rural areas are peaceful and offer natural landscapes that are great for photography and reflection. However, if I had to choose, I would pick rural views for their calm atmosphere.

建議: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views and give a specific example. Correct grammar (’country’ singular, verb agreements) and use linking words (for example, especially) to introduce details. Mention a clear scene you like and why it appeals to you.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful landscapes that feel familiar to me. For example, I love photographing fields during the harvest season when the crops are golden and the light is warm, which makes the scenes very photogenic.

× Yes, I do seen I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have liked it since I was a child.

The original uses 'do seen' which is ungrammatical. The speaker wants to express a continuing preference from past to present, so the present perfect 'have liked' plus 'since I was a child' is appropriate. Use 'have liked' rather than simple past to show continuity. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct auxiliary usage.

× I I had a phone with me and and after going to do somewhere I I usually took the picture of that's place to to remember that I have go there.

✓ I had a phone with me, and after going somewhere I usually took pictures of the place to remember that I had been there.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order and forms ('going to do somewhere'), repeated words, incorrect noun form ('picture' -> 'pictures'), wrong demonstrative ('that's place'), and wrong verb tense at the end ('have go'). Use 'after going somewhere' (correct phrase), plural 'pictures' for repeated action, 'the place' or 'that place' for reference, and past perfect or simple past 'had been there' to indicate completed visit prior to remembering. Clean up repetitions and fix verb forms and articles.

× I like both the views in the urban area is a house next to house and I see the communist.

✓ I like both. In urban areas the views are houses next to houses and I see many people living close together.

Original mixes ideas and misuses quantifiers and nouns. 'Both' needs a pause or continuation. 'A house next to house' is wrong; use plural 'houses next to houses' or 'houses close together.' 'I see the communist' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; replaced with 'many people living close together' to convey dense urban population. Fix number agreement and choose appropriate quantifiers ('many').

× In the other hand, I think it is more natural to take take pictures and meditation in in.

✓ On the other hand, I think it is more natural to take pictures and meditate in rural areas.

Use the correct connector 'on the other hand.' Remove duplicate words. 'Meditation' should be the verb 'meditate' to match 'take pictures and meditate.' The sentence lacks the object 'rural areas' to contrast with urban areas. Ensure parallel verbs and complete prepositional phrase.

× In my countries, there's a lot of view that I think it is, it is really beautiful to, to, to picture, uh, for example, I in the field when, when it comes to the harvest seasoned.

✓ In my country there are many views that I think are really beautiful to photograph, for example, the fields during the harvest season.

Use singular 'country' unless multiple countries are meant. 'There's a lot of view' is wrong: use 'there are many views' or 'there is a lot of scenery.' 'Beautiful to picture' should be 'beautiful to photograph.' 'Harvest seasoned' is incorrect phrase; correct is 'harvest season.' Also remove unnecessary repetitions and filler words, and ensure subject-verb agreement ('views... are').