视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct subject-verb agreement and tense, and provide one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect the topic sentence and the detail.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural landscapes. For example, I often take pictures of mountains and wide skies because they help me relax and feel closer to nature.

建議: Clarify vocabulary (province vs rural) and fix grammar and coherence. Give one clear contrast using linking words (however, whereas) and a specific example. Avoid contradictory phrases and incomplete sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and less crowded than urban areas. For example, when I visited Tagaytay I could see Taal Lake clearly, which made me feel calm and relaxed.

建議: Organise response: start by answering directly, then give two specific examples with correct names and grammar. Avoid filler phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (however, and) to connect ideas and correct proper nouns (Hundred Islands, Tagaytay, Taal Lake).

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled abroad yet. For example, I love the Hundred Islands in Pangasinan, and my favourite spot is Tagaytay where you can see Taal Lake clearly.

× I especially like to take photos of mountains and the sky because it make it makes me feel more relaxed and closer to nature.

✓ I especially like to take photos of mountains and the sky because it makes me feel more relaxed and closer to nature.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'it' (third person singular), so use 'makes' not 'make' or duplicate forms. Remove the extra 'make' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use 'it makes me' when referring to a single idea or scene affecting you. Grammar problem type ID:2

× So whenever I go to visit provinces and I'd like to take photos of it.

✓ So whenever I visit provinces, I like to take photos of them.

The sentence has awkward structure and incorrect pronoun reference. 'Visit provinces' does not need 'go to', and 'provinces' is plural so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it'. Also 'I'd like to' implies hypothetical; use simple present 'I like to' for habitual action. Suggestion: use concise habitual present tense and matching plural pronoun. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer views in the province because the rural areas in the Philippines is very dense and very congested, whereas in the province it's clear and relaxing and the view is so serene and calming.

✓ I prefer views in the provinces because the rural areas in the Philippines are very dense and congested, whereas in the provinces they're clear and relaxing and the views are serene and calming.

Plural subjects require plural verbs: 'rural areas ... are' not 'is'. 'Province' should be pluralified to match context ('provinces'), and 'view' should be plural when speaking generally. Also avoid repeating 'very' and redundant adjectives. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches verb and maintain consistent plural/singular usage. Grammar problem type ID:27

× So for example when I visited I can see the. Taal Lake very clearly and that makes me feel relaxed.

✓ For example, when I visited, I could see Taal Lake very clearly, and that made me feel relaxed.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I visited' indicates past, so use past modal 'could' and past 'made'. Also remove the stray period and place commas appropriately. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past visits. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I haven't had the chance to visit other countries so I can speak to it but I love the natural sceneries of the Philippines so I've been to mostly the northern part of the Philippines.

✓ I haven't had the chance to visit other countries, so I can't speak about them, but I love the natural scenery of the Philippines and I have mostly been to the northern part of the country.

Use 'can't speak about them' to express inability; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use singular 'scenery' not 'sceneries'. 'Speak to it' is incorrect pronoun and preposition usage. Also reorder for clarity and use 'I have mostly been to' for present perfect. Suggestion: use correct verb 'can/can't', correct preposition 'about', and treat 'scenery' as uncountable. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I loved the hundred islands located in Pangasinan but I my favorite is. And the Tagaitai Sattale lake.

✓ I loved the Hundred Islands in Pangasinan, but my favorite is Taal Lake and Tagaytay Saddle.

The original has fragmented and duplicated parts: 'but I my favorite is.' is ungrammatical. Combine ideas into one sentence. Use proper names and capitalization: 'Hundred Islands', 'Taal Lake', and 'Tagaytay Saddle' (correct local name). Also 'Tagaitai Sattale lake' seems misspelled; correct to 'Tagaytay Saddle'. Suggestion: avoid fragments, correct proper nouns, and construct a clear comparative clause for favorites. Grammar problem type ID:26