视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Also keep it concise (max 4–5 short sentences). For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes and explain why with a specific detail and a linking word (e.g., because, so, therefore).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because landscapes and backgrounds can make an image more striking. For example, natural light and interesting textures often inspire me to compose a shot carefully. Therefore, I try to capture scenes that communicate emotion or tell a story.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first (urban or rural), then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers. Mention concrete features (e.g., quiet, green spaces, architecture) to make the response specific and convincing.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more relaxing. For instance, the open fields, trees, and fresh air make it easier to unwind and take peaceful photos. In contrast, urban scenes are busier and less calming.

建議: Answer directly and avoid contradicting statements. If you like both, explain why by comparing distinct advantages of each with linking words (for example, "however" or "also"). Provide one specific example for each to make the idea concrete.

範例: I like views in both my country and abroad because each offers different attractions. For example, at home I enjoy familiar landscapes and cultural scenes that feel comforting, while in other countries I appreciate unique architecture and new natural landscapes that broaden my perspective.

× Yes, definitely I would love taking pictures in different, uh, views because it's make a picture.

✓ Yes, definitely I would love taking pictures of different views because they make a picture beautiful.

The student used 'love taking' which is acceptable, but 'it's make' is incorrect: after 'it' the verb must agree 'it makes' or use a plural subject 'they make'. Also 'in different views' is unnatural; use 'of different views'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and preposition: 'taking pictures of different views because they make a picture beautiful.'

× It's make picture very beautiful and when people see nature and the background and people will inspire and.

✓ They make the picture very beautiful, and when people see nature and the background, they will feel inspired.

'It's make' is subject-verb disagreement: 'it' with 'make' is wrong; use 'they make' or 'it makes'. 'Picture' needs an article 'the' and 'people will inspire and' is incomplete and uses 'inspire' incorrectly (people are inspired, not inspire). Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and complete clauses: 'they make the picture very beautiful, and when people see nature and the background, they will feel inspired.'

× Umm OK, I prefer you really ever because they are more comfortable and relaxing place.

✓ Umm OK, I prefer rural areas because they are more comfortable and relaxing places.

'you really ever' is unintelligible and likely meant 'rural areas'. Pronoun 'they' must match plural noun 'places'; add plural 'places' not 'place'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'rural areas' and ensure pronouns match number: 'they are more comfortable and relaxing places.'

× They have uh like to go there when.

✓ People like to go there because of the peaceful environment.

The original is an incomplete sentence and unclear. 'They have uh like to go there when' lacks object and time. Suggestion: rewrite to a complete sentence that explains why people go: 'People like to go there because of the peaceful environment.'

× I, uh, prefer both because, uh, in your country and in other countries, they all have a very, uh, good views.

✓ I prefer both because both my country and other countries have very good views.

Using 'your country' when speaking about the student's own country is wrong; use 'my country'. 'They all have a very good views' has pronoun 'they' ambiguous and 'views' is plural so 'very good views' without 'a'. Suggestion: use 'both my country and other countries have very good views.'

× Like in our country, we have a very best, very good view and I definitely always prefer to visit another country.

✓ For example, in our country we have very good views, and I definitely also like to visit other countries.

'a very best' is incorrect: 'best' is a superlative and does not combine with 'very' or 'a' here. Use 'very good' or 'the best'. 'I definitely always prefer to visit another country' is awkward: 'definitely also like to visit other countries' is clearer and matches plural. Suggestion: avoid combining 'very' with 'best' and keep word order natural: 'we have very good views, and I definitely also like to visit other countries.'