视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、冗長で意味が不明瞭な箇所があります。質問には直接答えていますが、トピック文の後に具体的な補足や理由が不足しています。改善のために：1) 文法を整理して主語＋動詞の正しい形を使う（例：I like taking photos…）。2) 冗長な繰り返しを避け、1〜2文で理由や方法を簡潔に述べる。3) 「角度」「視点」などの語彙を正しく用いる。練習では短い一文で主張→次に具体例や方法を付け加える構成を意識してください。

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often try various angles and perspectives to make each photo feel new, for example by shooting from low positions or including leading lines to add depth.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で語彙の誤用（"beau abuse"など）が見られます。主張はあるが理由の提示がまとまっておらず、論理的なつながり（linking words）も弱いです。改善のために：1) 明確なトピック文（I prefer urban views.）を使う。2) 理由を1〜2つに絞り、それぞれを明確に説明する。3) because, however, for exampleなどの接続詞を使って論理を示す。発音や語彙は事前に練習して正しい語を使ってください。

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and tall buildings. For example, skyscrapers and busy streets create interesting compositions and make me feel comfortable and inspired.

建議: 主張は明確ですが、文法ミスと語順の問題、語彙選択の不自然さ（"streets wide is very so huge"など）があります。比較をする際は比較構文を正しく使い、具体的な理由（例：広い通り、空気、建築様式）を挙げて説明してください。改善のために：1) 比較表現（more ... than / wider streets）を使う。2) 理由を一つ示し、その結果を短く説明する。3) 冗長な語や曖昧な表現を避ける。

範例: I prefer views in other countries because streets and public spaces tend to be wider, which makes me feel I can breathe more easily. For example, in some European cities large boulevards and open squares feel more spacious than crowded downtown areas at home.

× I like to taking pictures of different views from other peoples and they I often when I when I taking the pictures I often take the from different aspects that often the people taking the angles and I try to make the new photographs.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views of other people, and when I take pictures I often photograph from different angles to create new images.

The original contains an incorrect verb pattern 'like to taking'; after 'like' the correct forms are either 'like to do' or 'like doing'. 'To taking' is wrong. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural of 'people'. Redundant fragments and repeated phrases cause sentence structure errors. Suggestions: use 'I like taking' or 'I like to take', use 'other people' not 'peoples', remove repetitions and combine ideas into clear clauses, and use 'angles' and 'create new images' for clarity.

× I like the beau abuse in the urban areas, the the generally speaking, most of people like they tend to like the rural areas, but actually I liked to see the so much high buildings and I it's feels me comfortable and I because it's.

✓ I like the beauty of urban areas. Generally speaking, most people tend to prefer rural areas, but I like to see very tall buildings because they make me feel comfortable.

Errors include 'the beau abuse' which is meaningless and likely intended 'the beauty', and 'most of people' should be 'most people' (quantifier usage). 'So much high buildings' is incorrect: use 'very tall buildings' or 'so many high buildings' depending on count/degree. 'I it's feels me comfortable' mixes pronouns and verb forms; correct is 'they make me feel comfortable'. Suggestions: use correct nouns ('beauty'), proper quantifiers ('most people'), correct adjective forms ('tall' rather than 'high' for buildings), and the fixed expression 'make me feel comfortable'.

× I prefer views in other countries, the Japan in urban areas is seems like very authentic, but actually the other countries the streets wide is very so huge and feel more comfortable to can breathe more smoothly.

✓ I prefer views in other countries; urban areas in Japan seem very authentic, but in other countries the streets are much wider and I feel more comfortable because I can breathe more easily.

Problems: 'the Japan' uses incorrect article; country names usually take no article. 'is seems' combines two verbs; correct is 'seem' or 'seems' depending on subject — here plural 'urban areas' take 'seem'. 'the streets wide is very so huge' has word order and degree errors; correct: 'the streets are much wider'. 'feel more comfortable to can breathe' mixes infinitive/modal and auxiliary verbs; use 'I feel more comfortable because I can breathe more easily.' Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before country names, ensure subject-verb agreement ('areas seem'), correct adjective/adverb order ('much wider', 'more easily'), and use proper clause linking for reasons.