视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak more clearly and use correct grammar; give a direct topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and keep answers to no more than five sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes, explain why (memory, sharing photos), and give a specific example of a place you photographed.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. I do this because photos help me remember the trip and let me share memories with my friends online. For example, when I visited the coast last year I took photos of the cliffs at sunset because the light and colours were beautiful.

建議: Give a clear preference with one or two supported reasons and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas, and use appropriate vocabulary (nighttime skyline, city lights).

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy city skylines at night. For example, the roads and building lights create striking contrasts and interesting patterns that are great for photography.

建議: State your preference clearly and provide specific, organized reasons. Use varied vocabulary (mountains, waterfalls, wildlife) and avoid vague phrases or repetitions. Add a brief example to illustrate your point.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has varied landscapes such as mountains, waterfalls and rivers, as well as diverse wildlife. For instance, last year I visited a waterfall that had a scenic trail and many native birds, which made it a memorable place to photograph.

× Yes, I like take taking pictures of different views when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I travel.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking' (verb + -ing). Remove the incorrect 'take' before 'taking'. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing for general preferences (e.g., 'I like taking photos').

× When I travel in these places, I remember I remember this places often often I shared the my friend online friends again, I remember this place again.

✓ When I travel to these places, I often remember them and share photos with my friends online.

Multiple issues: incorrect preposition 'in' should be 'to' when talking about traveling to places; repetition and awkward phrasing; incorrect plural and pronoun agreement ('this places' should be 'these places' or 'them'); extra words 'often often' and 'again' are redundant; 'the my friend online friends' is incorrect. Suggestion: simplify into one clear sentence, ensure correct plural and pronoun agreement, and use appropriate preposition ('to').

× This places are very.

✓ These places are very beautiful.

'This places' is incorrect: use plural demonstrative 'these'. The sentence is incomplete because 'very' requires an adjective (e.g., 'beautiful', 'interesting'). Suggestion: choose an appropriate adjective and correct the demonstrative to 'these'.

× I perform views in urban areas because in urban areas nighttime view is very very very external view in the urban areas because the roads and lights in the building.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because the nighttime scenery is very striking due to the roads and building lights.

Multiple errors: 'perform views' is incorrect—use 'prefer'. 'Nighttime view is very very very external view' is ungrammatical and repetitive; 'external view' is not idiomatic. Repetition of 'in the urban areas' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'prefer', replace awkward phrases with 'nighttime scenery' or 'night views', and avoid unnecessary repetition. Grammar types involved: incorrect verb choice and sentence structure.

× I perform use in our country because of my country have different mountains and waterfalls, rivers, different type of humans, different type of different type of animals in there in our country.

✓ I prefer to travel in my country because it has different mountains, waterfalls, and rivers, and many kinds of people and animals.

Errors: 'perform use' is incorrect—use 'prefer' or 'prefer to travel'; 'because of my country have' is ungrammatical—use 'it has' for subject-verb agreement; 'different type of humans' is awkward—use 'kinds of people'; redundant phrase 'different type of different type of animals' and unnecessary 'in there in our country'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to travel in my country' and ensure subject-verb agreement ('it has'), remove redundancies, and use appropriate nouns ('people', 'animals').