视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words like "skin" and incorrect verb forms. For example, say why you enjoy different angles and mention a concrete detail (lighting, composition, subject).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos from different angles. For example, I often move around a subject to find better lighting and composition, because a single shot can miss interesting backgrounds or details.

建議: Give a clear preference with specific reasons and correct vocabulary. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid invented words like "skin" or "certificates me." Mention concrete elements (greenery, wildlife, peace) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and greener. For example, the countryside often has open fields, trees and birds, which I find more relaxing than busy city streets.

建議: Answer directly and provide specific reasons and an example. Correct grammar (use singular/plural, articles) and connect ideas with linking words (for instance, such as). Clarify unclear phrases like "Suggest by being alone."

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I know many beautiful spots here. For instance, I like going to Chan Beach alone since its sunsets and quiet shore make it perfect for photography.

× Yeah, I like to taking pictures of different views because when I taking picture of a single shot, I don't like the scene and the background I suffering with.

✓ Yeah, I like taking pictures of different views because when I take a single shot, I don't like the scene and the background I am left with.

The phrase 'like to taking' incorrectly combines the infinitive 'to' with the gerund 'taking'; use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'When I taking picture' lacks the correct verb form; use the base form 'take' after 'when'. 'I suffering with' is incorrect; the present continuous passive/active should be 'I am left with' or 'I suffer from', depending on meaning. Suggestion: remove 'to' before gerund, use simple present 'take' after 'when', and rephrase the final clause for clarity.

× So I'd like to take in different views if it has some beautiful skin.

✓ So I'd like to take different views if they have some beautiful scenery.

The word 'skin' is the wrong noun here; 'scenery' or 'views' fits context. 'Take in different views' is acceptable but 'take different views' or 'shoot different views' is clearer. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'it has' should be 'they have' to match plural 'views'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' and match plural pronoun with the noun.

× Honestly, I like the view of rural and rest rather than urban areas because it has many skin that's such beautiful and such certificates me, and it has many green environment skin that suggests birds and some animals.

✓ Honestly, I prefer rural views rather than urban ones because there are many beautiful scenes and lots of green environments that attract birds and some animals.

Multiple errors: 'the view of rural and rest' is unclear; use 'rural views' or 'the countryside'. 'It has many skin' uses 'skin' incorrectly; use 'scenes' or 'areas'. 'That's such beautiful and such certificates me' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'that are so beautiful and relaxing' or 'that please me'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it has many' should be 'there are many'. 'Green environment skin' should be 'green environments' or 'green spaces'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer rural views... there are many beautiful scenes and green spaces that attract wildlife'.

× I do prefer my own country views rather than other countries because in my country there is many place that have a nice beautiful view.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because in my country there are many places that have nice beautiful views.

The phrase 'there is many place' uses singular 'is' with plural 'many'; use 'there are' for plural. 'Place' should be plural 'places' to match 'many'. Also 'nice beautiful view' is redundant; 'nice' or 'beautiful' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'there are many places' and plural 'views' for agreement.

× Suggest by being alone or near Chan beach.

✓ For example, I like being alone or visiting Chan Beach.

This fragment 'Suggest by being alone or near Chan beach' is not a complete or grammatical sentence. It lacks a clear subject and verb; 'Suggest' is misused. Also 'near Chan beach' is awkward; use 'visiting Chan Beach' or 'being near Chan Beach'. Suggestion: rephrase as a complete sentence showing it is an example, e.g. 'For example, I like being alone or visiting Chan Beach.'