视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Focus on clarity: say why you enjoy taking photos, what kind of photos you like, and how they make you feel. Avoid filler words and self-corrections.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture memories and appreciate beauty. For example, I like photographing sunsets and city skylines, which remind me of places I’ve been. This makes me feel creative and more connected to my surroundings.

建議: Give a clear preference statement followed by two specific reasons, linked logically. Use accurate adjectives and correct word order. Avoid vague phrases like “the scenery is much.” Be concise and provide an example to support your view.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because the landscapes are more natural and authentic. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice terraces and quiet coastal villages, which create memorable and unique images. These scenes often feel calmer and more inspiring than busy cityscapes.

建議: State your preference clearly and give precise reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and replace vague phrases like “nature vibes” with concrete descriptions (e.g., beaches, forests). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include a brief example or comparison.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I find the natural scenery here—such as beaches, mountains and rice fields—very peaceful and beautiful. For example, visiting the beaches in the Philippines helps me relax and appreciate local landscapes before I explore sights abroad.

× Yes, I do so because it makes me it's it I love to saw myself what was I can do or the things that makes me feel beautiful.

✓ Yes, I do, because I love to see myself and the things I can do, and the photos make me feel beautiful.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and word-form errors: extra fillers ('it's it'), wrong verb forms ('saw' instead of 'see'), incorrect word order ('what was I can do'), and subject-verb agreement ('things that makes' should be 'things that make'). Suggestion: simplify into clear clauses, use present infinitive 'see' for general habit, reorder to 'the things I can do', and match plural noun with plural verb 'make'.

× I must prepare on the rural areas because the views are more nice and more authentic and I like being unique in a way that the the photos makes memorable and makes me realise that the scenery is much.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the views are nicer and more authentic, and I like being unique; the photos are memorable and make me realize the scenery more.

Errors: incorrect verb choice 'must prepare on', article misuse 'the rural areas' (unnecessary 'the'), comparative form 'more nice' should be 'nicer', subject-verb agreement 'the photos makes' should be 'the photos are' or 'make', and awkward phrase 'scenery is much'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' instead of 'must prepare on', use comparative adjective 'nicer', ensure verb agrees with plural subject, and express 'appreciate the scenery more' or 'make me realize the scenery more' for clarity.

× I understand that the views in our country is for me, it's the most beautiful views that we have and I want to experience first in our country because the nature vibes we saw here in the Philippines is for me the most relaxed.

✓ I understand that the views in our country are the most beautiful, and I want to experience them here first because the natural atmosphere we see in the Philippines is the most relaxing to me.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('the views... is' should be 'are'), repetition and awkward phrasing 'is for me, it's the most beautiful views that we have' and tense inconsistency 'we saw' should be present 'we see' to match general statement. 'Nature vibes' is informal; use 'natural atmosphere' or 'nature's vibe'. Also 'is... the most relaxed' should be 'is the most relaxing'. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement, use consistent present tense for general truths, and choose appropriate adjective forms ('relaxing').