视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve naturalness and clarity: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid vague phrases (e.g. "diverse nature scenery" is fine but "astonishing" needs context), correct articles and prepositions ("go to the beach"), and reduce redundancy. Add one brief specific supporting detail and a linking word. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes — I enjoy photographing different types of natural scenery. For example, I often go to the beach to capture sunrise light on the waves and the patterns in the sand, which I find very striking. I also take close-ups of shells and plants to show detail.

建議: This answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by adding a linking word and a specific example to support the preference. Use varied vocabulary (e.g. "prefer" -> "strongly prefer", "breathtaking" is fine) and keep to two sentences.

範例: I strongly prefer rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful, unspoilt landscapes, especially forests and mountains. For instance, I like hiking in the hills where I can see panoramic views and hear only birdsong.

建議: This answer is unclear and contains errors and incomplete sentences. Clarify the reason for preferring other countries (e.g. variety, novelty), remove unrelated words like "freshmen", complete the example, and use linking words. Aim for a topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail or example.

範例: I usually prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural settings that I haven't seen before. For example, when I travel abroad I look for unique natural sites like volcanic lakes or alpine meadows that I can't find at home.

× For example, I usually go to beach and take lots of photos.

✓ For example, I usually go to the beach and take lots of photos.

Missing definite article 'the' before the noun 'beach'. In English, singular countable place nouns like 'beach' often require an article; use 'the beach' when referring to a specific or typical place you visit. Suggestion: include 'the' when speaking about going to the beach in general contexts (e.g., 'go to the beach').

× Yes, I totally enjoy taking photos of diverse nature scenery.

✓ Yes, I totally enjoy taking photos of diverse natural scenery.

The phrase 'nature scenery' is not idiomatic; 'natural scenery' is the correct adjective-noun combination. This is a word choice/structure issue where an adjective ('natural') should modify 'scenery'. Suggestion: use 'natural scenery' or 'nature scenes'.

× It's mainly because I always find it astonishing.

✓ It's mainly because I always find it astonishing when I see it.

The sentence is vague and feels incomplete; adding a clause clarifies what 'it' refers to. Also 'astonishing' is acceptable but 'astonished' could be used if referring to the speaker's feeling. Suggestion: clarify the object or use 'I am always astonished by it' if focusing on the speaker's reaction.

× I absolutely prefer rural areas because I love the breathtaking natural scenery, especially the trees and mountains.

✓ I absolutely prefer rural areas because I love the breathtaking natural scenery, especially the trees and the mountains.

This is a minor article consistency issue: when listing specific types like 'trees and mountains' in context of 'the natural scenery', adding 'the' before 'mountains' improves parallelism but is optional. If treating them generally, original can be acceptable. Suggestion: add 'the' for balance: 'the trees and the mountains'.

× I usually prefer views in other countries due to freshmen.

✓ I usually prefer views in other countries because I'm new here / because I'm a freshman.

The phrase 'due to freshmen' is incorrect and unclear. 'Due to' should be followed by a noun phrase indicating a cause, and 'freshmen' (plural) doesn't match the speaker context. If the speaker means they are a freshman and want to see other countries, use 'because I'm a freshman' or 'because I'm new here'. Suggestion: clarify the reason and use correct subject and verb.

× For example, I tend to choose more natural scenery when I.

✓ For example, I tend to choose more natural scenery when I travel / when I visit other places.

The sentence is incomplete ('when I' needs a verb or clause). Add the action that completes the subordinate clause, such as 'travel' or 'visit other places'. Suggestion: finish the clause to make the sentence grammatical.