视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Replace informal or exaggerated words (e.g., "insane beauty") with precise adjectives, correct small grammar issues, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

範例: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views. I often visit new places and use my phone or camera to capture landscapes such as mountains, rivers and waterfalls. For example, last month I photographed a nearby waterfall at sunset, which looked striking because of the warm light on the rocks.

建議: Make the response grammatically correct and clearer. Use one topic sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid repetition and ensure coherence. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels more peaceful and green. For example, village walks let me enjoy wide fields and quiet streams, which help me relax and appreciate nature.

建議: Be specific and concise. Start with a clear stance (e.g., you appreciate both but prefer abroad), then give a specific reason and an example. Correct grammar ("other countries", "scenery"), avoid vague phrases like "they are so" and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "for instance").

範例: I appreciate the scenery in my own country, but I tend to prefer views in other countries, such as Switzerland, because of its dramatic mountains and valleys. For instance, the alpine landscapes and clear lakes there offer a different scale and atmosphere compared with local scenery.

× I love to visit new and attractive places and capture their insane beauty in my phone or my camera.

✓ I love visiting new and attractive places and capturing their incredible beauty on my phone or camera.

Use gerund (-ing) after 'love' for actions (Grammar Problem Type 10). Also 'insane' is informal; 'incredible' is better. Use 'on my phone or camera' for correct preposition (preposition error also present but primary is verb form).

× And I love taking pictures of beautiful mountains, valleys, river, waterfalls.

✓ I love taking pictures of beautiful mountains, valleys, rivers, and waterfalls.

List items should use correct plural forms ('river' -> 'rivers') and include proper commas and conjunction 'and' (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× No doubt I prefer exploring rural areas more because their beauty their there is exceptional and the greenery I feel more peace and soothing environment in villages.

✓ No doubt I prefer exploring rural areas more because their beauty is exceptional, and the greenery makes me feel more peaceful and provides a soothing environment in villages.

Original has repeated words and incorrect clause structure. Replace 'their there is' with 'their beauty is' and use correct pronoun/reference and verb phrases. Also change 'I feel more peace' to 'makes me feel more peaceful' for natural expression (Grammar Problem Type 12).

× I love them.

✓ I love rural areas.

Using 'them' is vague. Replace with a clear noun to specify the subject 'rural areas' (Grammar Problem Type 12).

× Yes, I love the scenery view of my country, but I do prefer other country as well like Switzerland.

✓ Yes, I love the scenery of my country, but I also prefer other countries, such as Switzerland.

'Scenery view' is redundant; use 'scenery'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country'; 'such as' is better than 'like' in this context. Corrections address quantifier/article and phrasing (Grammar Problem Types 14 and 22).

× I love that country and that place is so beautiful.

✓ I love that country; it is so beautiful.

Use a pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'that country' for natural sentence flow and avoid repeating 'that place' (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× The mountains, the valley and many scenes from that place is incredible and they are so.

✓ The mountains, the valley, and many scenes from that place are incredible.

Subject is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (Grammar Problem Type 27). Remove vague 'and they are so' which is redundant. Clarify number agreement between subject and verb.