视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verbs and pronouns, avoid repetition, and limit to 2–4 supporting sentences. Add specific details (what kinds of views, when you take them) and linking words (because, and, so).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing natural scenes like mountains and rivers because they remind me of peaceful moments. I often take photos with my family during trips so we can keep those memories, and I also take solo shots when I want to capture the atmosphere.

建議: Clarify your preference and give specific reasons using correct vocabulary and linking words. Decide whether you mean urban or rural (transcript is inconsistent). Use 2–3 supporting points (facilities, atmosphere, memories) and avoid repeating words.

範例: I prefer urban areas because I grew up in a town with many facilities and lively streets. For example, there are parks, cafes and photo spots that make it easy to take interesting pictures. Also, I can meet friends more often in the city, which helps me capture candid moments.

建議: Be more precise and fluent: use correct pronouns and verb forms, and add one or two specific examples of places or scenes you like. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to structure your answer and avoid filler sounds.

範例: I prefer taking photos in my own country because I feel a strong connection to my family and culture. For example, I love photographing the green valleys near my hometown and the nearby rivers at sunset, which give beautiful light and familiar scenes.

× Yes I talking pictures differently because he give me a lot of memories to create the and think they give me a connected to the nature also and I like clicking the photos with the friends and families because I create the memory with my family so that's why I taking.

✓ Yes, I take pictures in different ways because they give me a lot of memories and make me feel connected to nature. I also like taking photos with friends and family because I create memories with them, so that's why I take pictures.

Multiple errors relate to incorrect use of verb + -ing and base forms. 'I talking' should be 'I take' or 'I am taking' depending on meaning; here simple present 'I take' is appropriate. 'Clicking the photos' is informal but 'taking photos' is correct. 'That's why I taking' needs 'take' (base form) after 'that's why'. Also pronoun and noun references ('he give','they give me a connected') are unclear and corrected to 'they give me' and 'connected to nature'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits (I take, I like taking), use 'taking photos' for the activity, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes I talking pictures differently because he give me a lot of memories to create the and think they give me a connected to the nature also and I like clicking the photos with the friends and families because I create the memory with my family so that's why I taking.

✓ Yes, I take pictures in different ways because they give me a lot of memories and make me feel connected to nature. I also like taking photos with friends and family because I create memories with them, so that's why I take pictures.

'He give' is incorrect; third person singular requires 'gives'. Also 'they give me a connected to the nature' is ungrammatical and was changed to 'they give me ... connected to nature'. Ensure verbs agree with subjects: 'he gives', 'they give'. Suggest checking each subject and using proper verb forms.

× Yes I talking pictures differently because he give me a lot of memories to create the and think they give me a connected to the nature also and I like clicking the photos with the friends and families because I create the memory with my family so that's why I taking.

✓ Yes, I take pictures in different ways because they give me a lot of memories and make me feel connected to nature. I also like taking photos with friends and family because I create memories with them, so that's why I take pictures.

Pronouns were inconsistent and unclear: 'he' and 'they' were used ambiguously. Replaced with 'they' to refer to pictures or views. Use clear antecedents: if you mean 'photos' or 'views', refer to them consistently with 'they' or 'them'.

× Yes I talking pictures differently because he give me a lot of memories to create the and think they give me a connected to the nature also and I like clicking the photos with the friends and families because I create the memory with my family so that's why I taking.

✓ Yes, I take pictures in different ways because they give me many memories and make me feel connected to nature. I also enjoy taking photos with friends and family because I create memories with them, so that's why I take pictures.

Original sentence was run-on and disorganized. I split into two clear sentences, removed extraneous words ('to create the and think'), and corrected word order. Suggest dividing long ideas into shorter sentences and keeping one idea per clause.

× I like urban area because my hometown is always urban area.

✓ I like urban areas because my hometown is an urban area.

Use plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally, and use article 'an' with 'urban area' when referring to one specific hometown. Original mixed singular/plural incorrectly.

× My village is very valuable.

✓ My village is very special to me.

'Valuable' usually means 'worth a lot of money'; 'special to me' expresses emotional value. Choose adjectives that match intended meaning.

× They also connected to me nature and always give me a close connection to with my friends and family.

✓ It is also connected to nature and always gives me a close connection with my friends and family.

Pronoun 'they' was incorrect for 'village' (singular). Changed to 'it' and adjusted verbs for agreement. Removed redundant 'to' in 'connection to with'.

× A lot of memories in my village and a lot of lot of you in my village.

✓ I have many memories in my village and I visit it often.

Original fragments lacked verbs and contained repetition 'a lot of lot of you'. I supplied verbs and clarified meaning. Suggest using complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs.

× So that's why I prefer.

✓ So that's why I prefer it.

Add object 'it' after 'prefer' to complete the meaning. 'Prefer' can stand alone only when followed by a clause or object.

× I prefer own country because it give me a close connection to with my relatives and with my family.

✓ I prefer my own country because it gives me a close connection with my relatives and my family.

Added possessive 'my' and corrected verb 'gives' for third person singular. Removed extra 'to' before 'with'. Ensure correct verb form and preposition 'with'.

× Also because he's give me a good view like mountains, rivers and green valleys, uh, very beautiful in my own country.

✓ Also, because it gives me beautiful views like mountains, rivers, and green valleys in my country.

'He's give' is incorrect; use 'it gives' to refer to the country (third person singular). Adjusted noun phrase to 'beautiful views' and simplified structure.

× So that's why I prefer the own country to click the photos.

✓ So that's why I prefer my own country for taking photos.

'The own country' is incorrect; use 'my own country'. Also change 'to click the photos' to 'for taking photos' or 'to take photos'. Use appropriate article and gerund/infinitive structure.