视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use, verb choice). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition like “a lot of” and use more precise verbs (e.g., “remember” instead of “recover”).

範例: Yes, I do. Taking photos helps me remember details of places and buildings, so I don’t forget important moments. For example, on a family vacation last week I photographed historic buildings, which later helped me recall the layout and decorative features.

建議: Correct grammar (plural nouns, article use) and improve sentence structure: give a clear topic sentence, then a linked reason and one specific detail. Remove filler phrases like “which help my day special.” Use richer vocabulary (e.g., “night-time skylines,” “panoramic vistas”).

範例: I prefer urban views. I especially enjoy night-time skylines and illuminated buildings because their lights create dramatic panoramic vistas. For instance, seeing a city skyline after dusk always feels exciting and memorable.

建議: Fix grammar and word choice (country name pluralization/article, tense agreement, remove repetition). Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and a concise example. Replace vague words with concrete details (e.g., types of architecture or cultural scenes).

範例: I prefer views abroad because foreign cities often feature unfamiliar architecture and lively street scenes. For example, during a trip to the Philippines I photographed colorful colonial buildings and bustling markets, which produced photos I couldn’t have taken at home.

× Yes, because taking a lot of pictures help me recall the memories such as the building and the details.

✓ Yes, because taking a lot of pictures helps me recall memories such as buildings and details.

Subject-verb agreement error (ID 27): The gerund phrase 'taking a lot of pictures' is singular as a unit and requires the singular verb 'helps' rather than 'help'. Also 'the memories' and 'the building' use unnecessary definite article; use plural 'memories' and 'buildings' to match general meaning and parallel 'details'. Suggestion: Use 'helps' with singular subjects and match plurality in nouns for general references.

× For example, on a family vacation last week, I took a lot of pictures which helped me to recover the important memory.

✓ For example, on a family vacation last week, I took a lot of pictures which helped me recover an important memory.

Past tense issue (ID 5) and article usage (ID 22): The past tense 'helped' is correct, but 'to recover' is unnecessary after 'helped' and 'the important memory' is too specific; use 'an important memory' for one of possibly many. Suggestion: Omit 'to' after 'helped' and choose appropriate article (a/an) when referring to a non-specific memory.

× I prefer views in the big cities because especially I love to see illuminated building and panoramic views of the city which help my day special and memorable.

✓ I prefer views in big cities because I especially love to see illuminated buildings and panoramic city views which make my day special and memorable.

Incorrect adverb placement (ID 20) and adjective/adverb use (ID 13) and plural issue (ID 1): 'especially' should be placed before the phrase it modifies ('I especially love'), 'the big cities' is unnecessary article for general preference so use 'big cities', 'building' should be plural 'buildings', and 'help my day special' is ungrammatical — use 'make my day special' (verb 'make' + object + adjective). Suggestion: Place adverbs near the verb they modify, ensure noun plurality matches context, and use correct verb collocations like 'make ... special'.

× I prefer views in foreign countries because they offer unfamiliar architecture and cultural scenes.

✓ I prefer views in foreign countries because they offer unfamiliar architecture and cultural scenes.

No grammatical correction needed from listed types; sentence is correct. Explanation: The preposition 'in' with 'foreign countries' is appropriate and the sentence conforms to tense and agreement rules. (No change required.)

× For example, on a vacation to Philippine, I took a lot of pictures which gives give me unique images I could capture locally.

✓ For example, on a vacation to the Philippines, I took a lot of pictures which gave me unique images I could not capture locally.

Article and proper noun form (ID 22) and verb tense/subject-verb agreement (ID 5 and 27): Use the plural proper noun 'the Philippines' with definite article 'the'. 'Gives give' is a typo and tense mismatch; since the action is in the past, use 'gave'. Also 'I could capture locally' implies ability; to show contrast use 'could not capture locally'. Suggestion: Use correct country name form 'the Philippines', fix verb form to past tense 'gave', and ensure verb phrases reflect intended contrast ('could not capture').