视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ama dil bilgisi ve akıcılık zayıf. Cümle yapıları hatalı; gereksiz tekrar ve eksik kelimeler var. Örneğin: 'when I take a picture and after I look them' yerine 'when I take a picture and later look at it' demelisiniz. 'Some memories about my moments' ifadesi belirsiz; bunun yerine spesifik bir örnek verin (ör. 'a family picnic'). Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümlede kalarak daha doğal bağlantı kelimeleri (because, so, then) kullanın ve gereksiz duraksamalardan kaçının.

範例: I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I take a photo at a family picnic, I can recall the weather, people and conversations. This emotional connection makes photography very meaningful to me.

建議: Cevap karışık ve anlaşılması zor; birçok telaffuz/dikte hatası ve anlamsız kelimeler ('beefs', 'rewriting'). Net bir tercih belirtin, ardından basit bir neden ve bir örnek verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (however, but, because) düşüncelerinizi düzenleyin. Ayrıca doğru kelime kullanımına dikkat edin: 'views of nature', 'urban areas have cityscapes' gibi.

範例: I usually prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. However, I also appreciate rural areas for their natural beauty, such as open fields and forests. For instance, I like photographing city skylines at sunset but I sometimes go to the countryside for landscape shots.

建議: Cevap anlaşılması zor ve bazı kelimeler yanlış (ör. 'waves'/'weaves' kullanımı karışık). Önce açık bir tercih ifadesi verin, sonra nedenini spesifik örnekle destekleyin ve karşılaştırma yapın. Gereksiz dolaylı ifadelerden kaçının ve daha net kelimeler kullanın: 'views in my country', 'more familiar', 'unique' gibi.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and personal to me. For example, the coastal scenes where I grew up remind me of family outings, so I notice small details other people might miss. Still, views in other countries often feel unique and interesting because they show different landscapes and cultures.

× Yes, I like because when I take a picture and after I look them, I remember some memories about my moments. So it's a very emotional and. Valuable for person I think.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures because when I look at them later, I remember moments and feelings. So I think it is very emotional and valuable for a person.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect verb patterns ('I like because' should be 'I like taking pictures'), wrong object pronoun usage ('look them' should be 'look at them'), redundant phrasing ('remember some memories about my moments' is repetitive), sentence fragment and punctuation error ('So it's a very emotional and. Valuable for person' is split and missing article). Improve by using correct verb+ing after 'like', use 'look at' with objects, remove redundancy, combine fragments into complete sentences, and include articles ('a person').

× Normally I prefer urban areas, but uh about beefs. Of course rural areas uh, have more beautiful views about the nature, see uh any tree. But urban areas only have city rewriting.

✓ Normally I prefer urban areas, but when it comes to scenery, rural areas have more beautiful views of nature, like trees. Urban areas mainly have cityscapes.

Errors include wrong prepositions ('about beefs' is incorrect; likely meant 'about views' or 'scenery'), wrong preposition 'views about the nature' should be 'views of nature', and awkward phrases ('see any tree', 'city rewriting'). Use 'when it comes to' to introduce contrast, 'views of nature' for correct preposition, and 'cityscapes' to describe urban views. Also simplify and choose precise vocabulary.

× I think my country's waves are, uh, more beautiful than other countries, but uh, I see them. Not rarely, and it's uh, common for me. But in other countries weaves are, umm, different for me.

✓ I think the views in my country are more beautiful than in other countries, but I do not see them often, so they are familiar to me. Views in other countries feel different to me.

Pronoun and noun choice errors: 'my country's waves' is likely intended as 'views' and 'than other countries' needs parallel structure ('more beautiful than those in other countries' or 'than in other countries'). 'I see them. Not rarely' is fragmented and uses a double negative; correct to 'I do not see them often'. 'Weaves' is a misspelling of 'views'. Fix pronoun reference and ensure parallel comparisons and complete sentences.