视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because", "for example") and correct tense and plural forms. Avoid filler sounds like "umm" and keep answers to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I visited a park in Australia, I took photos of the lake and trees; looking at them later makes me feel happy and brings back the exact atmosphere of that day.

建議: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve by correcting small grammar errors (use plurals and articles) and add one specific example to support your preference. Use a linking phrase like "for example" to connect supporting detail.

範例: I prefer rural areas because green countryside and open spaces make me feel calm and relaxed. For example, when I walk through a quiet rural trail I can hear birds and enjoy fresh air, while city streets are often crowded and noisy with traffic.

建議: Clarify your meaning, use correct sentence structure, and avoid hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a specific comparison and an example. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., "I prefer views in other countries" not "we use").

範例: I prefer views in other countries because travelling abroad exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, when I visited China I saw dramatic mountains and ancient towns that were very different from the urban scenery in Bangkok where I live now.

× I really like taking picture of different views because each view remind me the memory of that place, such as when I travel to the park umm as Australia and then when I open up, the picture is remind me that I really happy and the moment at that time.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because each view reminds me of the memory of that place; for example, when I traveled to a park in Australia, when I open the pictures they remind me that I was really happy at that moment.

This sentence has several issues that match the present participle/verb form and related agreement problems: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (count noun agreement), 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'each view' (subject-verb agreement), and 'is remind me' is incorrect verb usage and tense. Also 'when I travel' should be past 'when I traveled' to match the past experience, and 'the picture is remind me that I really happy' should be corrected to 'they remind me that I was really happy' with correct verb form and past adjective use. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree, use plural for countable nouns, and keep consistent past tense when describing past events.

× I prefer rural areas because the countryside and green sceneries always make me feel calm and relaxed and open space lifts my mood.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the countryside and green scenery always make me feel calm and relaxed, and open spaces lift my mood.

'Green sceneries' is unidiomatic; 'scenery' is typically an uncountable noun so use 'green scenery'. 'Open space' should be plural 'open spaces' to match the general sense. Keep parallel structure with verbs 'make' and 'lift'. Suggestion: use uncountable 'scenery' and pluralize general nouns when speaking about them in general.

× In contrast, urban area often seem crowded and very noisy with the traffic, which I don't enjoy.

✓ In contrast, urban areas often seem crowded and very noisy with traffic, which I don't enjoy.

'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match 'often seem' and the general comparison; alternatively change the verb to 'often seems' for singular. Also 'the traffic' is usually 'traffic' without the article. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches the verb and omit the article before uncountable nouns like 'traffic'.

× I prefer we use in the other countries because from my experience, I have travelled MMM from China is have like a beautiful scenery when compared with the uh, with Bangkok, the country that I Live Today and wish I it's really provide me the sceneries like.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because, from my experience, I have traveled from China to places with beautiful scenery compared with Bangkok, the country where I live today, and I wish it would provide me with similar scenery.

This sentence has many errors with pronouns and sentence structure: 'I prefer we use in the other countries' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer visiting other countries' or 'I prefer views in other countries'. 'I have travelled MMM from China is have like' mixes pronouns and verbs; use clear past tense 'I have traveled from China to places with beautiful scenery'. 'the country that I Live Today' should be 'the country where I live today' (use a relative clause with 'where'). 'wish I it's really provide me the sceneries like' should be 'I wish it would provide me with similar scenery'—use 'wish' with 'would' and 'provide ... with'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use correct relative pronouns, and match verbs/pronouns clearly; avoid filler sounds and maintain consistent tense.