视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且自然，但句子偏長且有小語法與連接詞問題（例如連詞後需分句），內容可更具體以豐富細節。建議使用一到兩個短句作主題句，然後用一兩句補充原因，並用合適的連接詞（because, so, however 等）使語意更清晰。避免冗長從句，並提供一個具體例子來支持觀點。

範例: I don't really enjoy taking photos; I'd rather live in the moment. For example, when I'm hiking I prefer to stop and soak up the view because taking out my phone interrupts the experience and my camera isn't very good, so the pictures usually turn out disappointing.

建議: 回答內容明確表達偏好且有原因，但第一句不完整且出現語句重複（"I prefer I feel small"）。建議先用一個清晰的主題句直接表明偏好，然後用兩句具體理由支持（如寧靜、空氣質量、視覺感受），並用連接詞如 "because" 或 "so" 連接原因，最後可以加一個短例子。

範例: I prefer rural views because they make me feel small and peaceful. For instance, standing by a mountain river helps me relax since the air is fresher and there are fewer distractions than in the city.

建議: 回答有明確立場並提供理由，但語言有小錯誤（例如 "architectures" 應為 "architecture"；"give" 應為 "gives"；句尾的 "online" 顯得不合適或多餘）。建議修正語法錯誤，使用一個主題句加兩個具體支持點（文化、建築、視角），並舉出一個具體旅遊經驗來增強說服力。

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often look more exotic and tell different stories. For example, visiting Lisbon last year I was fascinated by the colourful tiled facades and local traditions, which gave me a fresh perspective on design and everyday life.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photography, I would prefer to just enjoy the moment rather than stopping to take pictures.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into photography. I would prefer to just enjoy the moment rather than stop to take pictures.

句子由两个并列分句组成，前后用逗号连接会产生逗号拼接句（comma splice）。应使用句号或分号分开。此外，短语“rather than”后接动词时常用不定式原形（stop），而不是动名词（stopping）。建议分为两句，并把“stopping”改为“stop”。

× Plus I don't have a very good camera or phone so I find it's a bit of a hassle to try and capture nice photos.

✓ Plus, I don't have a very good camera or phone, so I find it's a bit of a hassle to try to capture nice photos.

句子中缺少必要的标点来分隔并列成分，导致句子读起来不顺畅。动词短语“try and capture”在正式写作或考试口语中不如“try to capture”规范，应改为不定式“try to capture”。另外在“Plus”后加逗号使衔接更自然。建议加入逗号并使用“try to”。

× I prefer I feel small.

✓ I prefer feeling small.

原句“I prefer I feel small.” 结构不正确，存在两个独立结构直接并列，语义也混乱。若想表达“我更喜欢（那种）让我感觉渺小的景色”，应使用动名词结构“prefer feeling”或改为完整从句“I prefer places where I feel small.”。这里选择更简洁的“prefer feeling small”。

× I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers and it's much more peaceful than the city.

✓ I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers, and it's much more peaceful than the city.

主要是标点问题，需要在并列成分之间加逗号使句子清晰。另外“it”指代不明确，但在口语中可接受；若要更明确可改为“the countryside is much more peaceful than the city.” 建议添加逗号或把最后部分改为完整主语结构以增强清晰度。

× I actually prefer the views in other countries because foreign landscapes feel more exotic and exciting.

✓ I actually prefer the views of other countries because foreign landscapes feel more exotic and exciting.

习惯用法问题：“views in other countries”可接受，但更常见的搭配是“views of other countries”或“views in other countries”。这里改为“views of other countries”使搭配更自然。该错误归类为介词/搭配使用问题。

× I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architectures, and traveling abroad always give me a fresh perspective online.

✓ I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architecture, and traveling abroad always gives me a fresh perspective.

“architectures”应为不可数名词“architecture”，不能加复数。动词“give”须与主语“traveling abroad”保持单数形式，应为“gives”。另外“fresh perspective online”中“online”不合语境且可能为笔误，应删除。总体为形容词/名词使用及主谓一致问题，建议把“architectures”改为“architecture”，把“give”改为“gives”，并删除“online”。