视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep your answer concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms, articles and word order, and avoid fillers like “you know”.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me relax and notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I photograph a seaside sunset, I feel calm and later sharing the photo lets my friends see something beautiful they might never visit.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Fix repetition, verb forms and comparative structure (e.g. ‘better than city views’).

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they help me relax and I enjoy being surrounded by nature. For example, rural scenery offers quiet walking paths and fresh air, which are much more peaceful than busy city streets.

建議: State your preference clearly, then provide specific, relevant reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and correct plural/singular and article errors (e.g. ‘other countries’ views’ or ‘views in other countries’).

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different cultures and traditions. For instance, visiting a foreign market lets me try local dishes and see architecture I’ve never seen before, which broadens my perspective.

× 'Of course I like to taking picture of different views because it make me more relaxed and you know if other people look at my post they're gonna feel like more interesting and that we have a new experience about different places.'

✓ 'Of course I like taking pictures of different views because it makes me more relaxed, and you know, if other people look at my posts they're going to find them more interesting and feel like they have a new experience of different places.'

'taking' should follow 'like' without 'to' because after like we use the gerund (verb + -ing). 'picture' should be plural because 'different views' implies multiple pictures. 'make' must be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' (or better: 'it makes me' refers to the activity). 'gonna' is informal and should be 'going to'. 'feel like more interesting' is incorrect: people 'find (something) interesting' or 'feel more interested'; here 'find them more interesting' is natural. 'that we have a new experience about different places' is awkward; use 'feel like they have a new experience of different places'. Suggestions: remove 'to' before gerund, use correct plural nouns, ensure subject-verb agreement, avoid informal 'gonna', and choose appropriate verbs ('find'/'feel').'

× 'I prefer views in rural areas because it it relax me and also like I enjoy being with nature nature and also we can get a fresh air and more better than.'

✓ 'I prefer views in rural areas because it relaxes me, and I enjoy being with nature. We can also get fresh air there, which is better.'

'it it relax me' has duplication and incorrect verb form: 'it relaxes me' is required for third-person singular. 'being with nature nature' repeats a word and should be 'being with nature'. 'get a fresh air' is incorrect article use; 'fresh air' is uncountable so no 'a'. 'more better' is redundant and incorrect; 'better' alone is sufficient. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, use correct third-person singular verb forms, omit unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns, and avoid redundant comparative forms.

× 'I prefer other countries view than my countries my country because like we can learn other culture and other traditional food like that and also in other country we can get more experience and better knowledge.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries to views in my country because we can learn about other cultures and traditional foods, and in other countries we can gain more experience and knowledge.'

'other countries view' needs plural and article/structure: use 'views in other countries'. Comparative 'prefer X than Y' is incorrect; use 'prefer X to Y'. 'my countries my country' is repetition and plural error. 'learn other culture' needs 'learn about other cultures'. 'other traditional food' should be plural 'traditional foods'. 'in other country' should be 'in other countries'. 'get more experience and better knowledge' — 'gain more experience and knowledge' is more natural and 'better knowledge' is vague; use 'knowledge' without 'better'. Suggestions: use correct comparative structure 'prefer...to...', pluralize countable nouns, use 'learn about', and use natural collocations like 'gain experience'.