视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然与具体。应直接给出主句说明喜欢拍摄，并用一两句具体细节支持（如拍什么视角、用什么设备、原因）。避免无意义的泛句与语法错误，句子控制在最多5句内并用连接词使表达连贯。

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and coastal sunsets because the light and colours change quickly. I usually use my smartphone or a lightweight camera, so I can take pictures whenever I see an interesting scene.

建議: 回答没有正面回应问题，偏离主题并且太简短。应先明确偏好（城市或农村），然后用1-2句具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 使逻辑清晰。

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the dynamic architecture and busy streets. For instance, I like photographing markets and tall buildings, which show the character of a city.

建議: 回答表达了偏好但语法与逻辑不够清晰。应先直接回答（本国或外国），然后说明原因并给出具体细节或对比，避免语法错误如 'smaller than' 用法不当。用连接词如 'because' 或 'while' 改善连贯性。

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to familiar places and know the best spots. For example, in Hong Kong I love photographing the skyline and Victoria Harbour at night because the lights create a dramatic scene.

× It's for example I would like to make sure the picture.

✓ For example, I want to make sure the picture looks good.

句子结构混乱：原句把“例如”与意图表达混在一起，缺少清晰的主谓结构。改为“For example, I want to make sure the picture looks good.” 可以明确表达举例和目的。建议在表达原因或目的时先用连接词（例如：for example / because / so that），然后使用完整的主语+谓语+宾语结构。

× I like the people.

✓ I like the views with people in them.

语义与提问不匹配且句子太简略：考官问的是偏好城市景观还是乡村景观，原句“I like the people.” 没能回答问题。将句子改为“I like the views with people in them.” 更贴合拍照喜好。注意在回答偏好问题时应直接说明偏好对象（urban/rural）或说明原因。

× I like my country with smaller than the other country because I think Hong Kong is so beautiful city.

✓ I prefer my country because it is smaller than other countries, and I think Hong Kong is a very beautiful city.

比较结构错误和冠词缺失：原句用“with smaller than”是不正确的比较结构，且“so beautiful city”缺少不定冠词。改为“it is smaller than other countries” 表示比较，另把“a very beautiful city” 用正确的冠词和程度副词修饰。建议学习比较级结构：主语 + be + 比较级 + than + 比较对象；以及可数名词前需使用冠词。