视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子有语法错误和冗余，需更自然和简洁地回答。注意时态和主谓一致（例如“makes”应为“make”），避免重复表达“relaxed”。可以用一到两句主题句加一两句细节支持，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes. I often focus on natural scenes like mountains and lakes because I find them beautiful and calming, and taking photos there helps me relax—for example, when I visited Xinjiang I spent hours capturing the scenery.

建議: 表达不够准确，有拼写和词语搭配错误（如“The Who I was”、“landscaper”）。应直接给出立场并用连接词说明原因与对比。尽量用具体例子和正确名词复数形式（mountains, lakes）。

範例: It depends on my mood and who I am with. If I'm with friends I prefer urban scenes—cafés, street art and skyline shots—because they offer lively backdrops; when I'm alone I choose natural landscapes like lakes and mountains for peaceful compositions.

建議: 句子结构和介词使用有问题（如“prefer enjoy in on country”）。应先给出明确观点，然后用两三个具体原因支持（熟悉文化、费用、机会）。避免模糊表达，注意语法和词序。

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the culture and local spots. Also travelling at home is usually cheaper, so I can visit more places and take more photos.

× I definitely enjoy taking photos of landscape.

✓ I definitely enjoy taking photos of landscapes.

原句中“landscape”应为可数名词复数或用可数形式单数前加限定词。因为说的是拍摄各种景观，使用复数“landscapes”更自然。建议把名词变为复数以匹配语境。

× I usually take photos of nature views because I think they're really beautiful and makes me really relaxed.

✓ I usually take photos of nature views because I think they're really beautiful and make me really relaxed.

主句里主语是“they”（指代复数“nature views”），谓语动词应与复数主语一致，因此使用“make”而不是“makes”。建议在复数主语后用复数动词。

× When I visit in Xinjiang, I really relaxed.

✓ When I visit Xinjiang, I really relax.

此句要表达一般现在时的习惯或常态，应使用现在时“relax”。另外，动词“visit”后不接介词“in”来表示去某地，直接说“visit Xinjiang”。原句混用了时态（现在和过去），需统一为一般现在时。

× It really depends on my mood and The Who I was.

✓ It really depends on my mood and who I am with.

原句“the Who I was”语法不正确且大小写错误。这里要表达“取决于我和谁在一起”，应使用关系代词“who”并搭配介词“with”，同时保持时态一致为现在“am”。建议改为“who I am with”。

× If I'm hanging out with my friends I prefer to go for city views like landscaper.

✓ If I'm hanging out with my friends, I prefer to go for city views like cityscapes.

原句“landscaper”是名词（景观设计师），不符合语境。要表达“城市景观”应使用“cityscape”或复数“cityscapes”。另外在复合句中主从句之间需要逗号。建议用“cityscapes”。

× If I'm by myself I prefer to nature landscape like lakes or mountain.

✓ If I'm by myself, I prefer natural landscapes like lakes or mountains.

原句中“prefer to nature landscape”结构错误。应使用动词短语“prefer [noun]”或“prefer to [verb]”。此外“nature landscape”应为形容词+名词“natural landscapes”，并且“lakes or mountain”中的“mountain”应为复数“mountains”。建议调整为“prefer natural landscapes like lakes or mountains”。

× Personally I prefer enjoy in on country because I think I'm more familiar with my country and the culture.

✓ Personally I prefer staying in my own country because I think I'm more familiar with my country and its culture.

原句“prefer enjoy in on country”词序错乱且动词搭配不当。动词“prefer”后常接动名词或名词短语，不能直接跟“enjoy in”。此外“on country”应为“own country”（拼写错误）。在表达“对本国更熟悉”时，需用“familiar with my country and its culture”。建议改为“prefer staying in my own country”。

× Besides my country is cheaper so I can save money and go to more.

✓ Besides, my country is cheaper so I can save money and travel to more places.

原句“go to more”缺少名词，语义不完整，应该是“go to more places”或“visit more places”。另外句首应加逗号衔接前句。建议加上名词“places”并用“travel”或“visit”更合适。