视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ (‘I want to I want to’) và sửa lỗi thì/động từ (memorises → memorise hoặc remember). Thêm một câu hỗ trợ ngắn gọn với liên từ để giải thích lí do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places I’ve visited. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes to capture the atmosphere and details I might forget later.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều sai ngữ pháp, từ không phù hợp và lặp từ. Cần nêu chủ đề trước rồi nêu lí do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như ‘because’ hay ‘so’ một lần, và dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: peaceful, scenery, open fields). Tránh tiếng ậm ừ và chỉnh cấu trúc câu để mạch lạc. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and natural. For example, I like open fields and small villages where I can see green hills and traditional houses.

建議: Cần câu mở rõ ràng và lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ (‘explore, explore’) và tiếng lấp đầy (‘uh’, ‘umm’). Có thể thêm một ví dụ ngắn về loại cảnh quan bạn yêu thích trong nước. Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (for example, because, so). Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful landscapes. For example, I enjoy visiting coastal areas and mountains at home, where the scenery feels familiar and unique.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I want to I want to memorises about the views I see.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I want to remember the views I see.

The error is using 'memorises' incorrectly. 'Memorise' is a verb meaning 'to commit to memory' and the correct form here is the base verb 'remember' or the infinitive 'to remember' after 'want to'. Also there is a repeated phrase 'I want to I want to' which must be reduced. Suggestion: use 'I want to remember' or 'I want to keep memories of' and avoid repeating phrases. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I prefer views in rural areas because I, uh, because I see the sign of in rural areas are very pay phones and some in some prestige. So I really like views in this.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I see signs in rural areas, such as pay phones and places with character. So I really like those views.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect and missing prepositions ('sign of in rural areas' is wrong), wrong nouns ('prestige' misused) and unclear phrasing. I corrected preposition placement ('signs in rural areas') and replaced unclear words with plausible alternatives. Suggestion: keep prepositional phrases simple ('in rural areas', 'such as') and avoid awkward literal translations. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer views in my country because, uh, my country has lots of pretty views, umm. So I want to explore, explore the views, yes.

✓ I prefer views in my country because my country has many beautiful views, so I want to explore them.

Use present simple consistently: 'has many beautiful views' is more natural than 'has lots of pretty views'; avoid filler repetition 'explore, explore' and replace with 'explore them' to refer back to 'views'. Suggestion: use concise phrases and ensure pronoun reference is clear. Grammar problem type ID:6