视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Also correct verb forms and plural/singular (e.g., "pictures" not "picture").

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph natural scenes such as sunsets and tree-lined paths because the colours and light are calming. I usually go to parks or nearby hills to find interesting compositions, which makes photography a relaxing hobby.

建議: Answer directly then support with specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and fix awkward phrasing ("the way off" is unclear). Use precise vocabulary like "peaceful", "relaxing", "scenery" correctly and avoid sentence fragments.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they are more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, quiet fields and forests help me unwind after a busy week, and the natural scenery provides better opportunities for landscape photography.

建議: Give a clear preference and explain with specific examples. Correct grammar ("I like" not "I like you watching"), use linking words ("however", "so"), and limit to 2–3 sentences with varied vocabulary like "destinations", "sights", "culture".

範例: I enjoy the views in my own country, but I prefer seeing views in other countries because I love discovering new landscapes and cultures. For example, when I travel I photograph coastal towns and historic cityscapes that are very different from the scenery at home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures in different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The preposition should be 'of' when saying 'pictures of something'. This is a collocation issue linking the noun 'pictures' with the object being depicted. Use 'pictures of different views' rather than 'in different views' to be natural and correct.

× For example, I like taking picture of the nature and I like going outside and just looking at the sky and take the photos and the trees and there's quarters and trees.

✓ For example, I like taking pictures of nature. I like going outside and just looking at the sky, taking photos of the trees and other scenery.

Multiple problems: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally (singular/plural). 'the nature' should be 'nature' (no article) because 'nature' is uncountable here. The verbs are inconsistent: use parallel gerunds ('going... and looking... taking') rather than mixing infinitive 'take'. 'there's quarters and trees' is unclear and ungrammatical; changed to 'other scenery' to convey intended meaning. Ensure parallel structure and correct article use.

× I like the way over taking picture because it feels so comfortable.

✓ I like the way of taking pictures because it feels so comfortable.

The phrase 'the way over taking picture' is incorrect. Use 'the way of taking pictures' to indicate the manner. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general activity. This fixes preposition/construction and singular/plural issues.

× Like I said before, I like the rural areas rather than the going outside and look around the city view.

✓ Like I said before, I prefer rural areas to going out and looking around the city.

Compare structures: use 'prefer A to B' instead of 'like A rather than B'. 'the going outside' is incorrect; use 'going out'. Verb forms must be parallel: 'going out and looking' (gerunds). 'city view' is awkward; 'the city' or 'the city scenery' is better. Also 'I like the rural areas rather than' mixes preferences awkwardly; 'I prefer rural areas to...' is clearer.

× I like the way off and relaxing my time and my body watching those kind of peaceful, uh, scenery.

✓ I like the way it relaxes me and how peaceful the scenery is when I watch it.

The original has 'way off' (wrong preposition) and incorrect phrase 'relaxing my time and my body watching'. Use a clearer structure: 'it relaxes me' or 'it helps me relax'. 'those kind of' should be 'that kind of' or 'those kinds of', and 'scenery' is uncountable so 'peaceful scenery' is correct. Ensure subject-verb clarity and correct determiners.

× I like you watching a lot of views about in my country but I prefer watching new view so I like go traveling around the world and see the new world and taking photos of the new destinations.

✓ I enjoy seeing many views in my country, but I prefer seeing new places, so I like to travel around the world and see new destinations and take photos there.

'I like you watching' is wrong pronoun use; should be 'I enjoy seeing' or 'I like seeing'. 'views about in my country' is ungrammatical—use 'views in my country'. 'watching new view' should be 'seeing new places' or 'new views'. Maintain verb forms: 'I like to travel' or 'I like traveling' and use parallel verbs 'see new destinations and take photos'. Also fix articles and prepositions ('in my country', 'around the world').