打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 発音の繰り返しや冗長な表現を減らし、主旨を明確にすることで自然さと流暢さを高めましょう。具体的には、

範例: I prefer handwriting because writing notes by hand helps me remember things better. For example, during lectures I find I understand and retain information more effectively when I write rather than type.

建議: 文法ミス（to writeの過剰や冠詞の扱い）を直し、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。また「普段は〜だが〜の時は…」という対比を明確に示す接続表現を使うと自然です。

範例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually use my smartphone for messages, and I only use my laptop when I need to write reports or essays.

建議: 「learned to type」を一度だけ使い、過去時制や語形の誤り（practice type typing）を修正しましょう。具体的な時や場所を明確に述べると説得力が増します。

範例: If I remember correctly, I learned to type when I was about ten at primary school. I practiced at home regularly, so my speed and accuracy improved quickly.

建議: 文の時制を現在形で統一したり、具体的な練習方法（タイピングソフトや目標速度）を加えると内容が具体的になります。また接続詞で流れを整えましょう。

範例: I practice typing every day and often email my friends to get more real-life practice. I also use online typing exercises to improve my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer handwriting because I think I write I write something down by my hand.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think writing something down by hand helps me remember it better.

The original sentence repeats 'I write' and uses an unnatural phrase 'by my hand.' Use the gerund 'writing' after 'think' when describing an activity, and 'by hand' is the correct idiom. Also use singular 'it' to refer to the act of writing to avoid disagreement. Suggestion: Use 'I think writing something down by hand helps me remember it better.'

× It helps me remember them better.

✓ It helps me remember things better.

Pronoun 'them' is unclear because 'something' is singular. Replace with 'things' for plural general reference or use 'it' to refer to the act. Maintain present simple 'helps' for habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'It helps me remember things better' or 'It helps me remember it better.'

× For example, when I take notes in a lecture, umm, I find I understand and return the information better when I just type.

✓ For example, when I take notes in a lecture, I find I understand and retain the information better when I handwrite.

The verb 'return' is incorrect; likely intended 'retain'. Also 'when I just type' conflicts with earlier preference for handwriting; change to 'handwrite' to match. Maintain present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use 'retain' instead of 'return' and ensure consistency: '...retain the information better when I handwrite.'

× No, I don't do that every day.

✓ No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day.

Original sentence is vague; restate the action asked by examiner to be clear. Use present simple negative for habitual action. Suggestion: Repeat the action 'type on a desktop or laptop' to be explicit.

× I usually use my smartphone to send a text message.

✓ I usually use my smartphone to send text messages.

Use plural 'text messages' to describe a habitual action. The original singular makes the statement sound like a single event. Suggestion: Use the plural for habitual activities: 'send text messages.'

× I only use the laptop when I to write some reports or some essay.

✓ I only use the laptop when I need to write reports or an essay.

Missing verb 'need' after 'when I'. Also 'some reports or some essay' is inconsistent: use plural 'reports' and 'an essay' or pluralize both. 'Need to write' correctly expresses purpose. Suggestion: 'I only use the laptop when I need to write reports or an essay.'

× Umm, if I remember correctly, I learned to type.

✓ If I remember correctly, I learned to type when I was 10 years old in primary school.

Fragment 'I learned to type.' is acceptable but redundant with next clause; combine sentences for clarity. Use past simple 'learned' for completed past action. Suggestion: Combine into one clear past-tense sentence.

× and I practice type typing in my home, so I improved very quickly.

✓ and I practiced typing at home, so I improved very quickly.

Mixed tenses and incorrect forms: 'practice type typing' is wrong. Use past simple 'practiced' to match 'learned', and use gerund 'typing'. 'At home' is more natural than 'in my home.' Suggestion: 'I practiced typing at home, so I improved very quickly.'

× I practiced typing every day and emailed my friends regularly to get more practice.

✓ I practiced typing every day and emailed my friends regularly to get more practice.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Past simple 'practiced' and 'emailed' are appropriate for describing past habitual practice. Suggestion: No change needed.

× This helped me improve both the speed and accuracy over time.

✓ This helped me improve both my speed and accuracy over time.

Add possessive 'my' before 'speed and accuracy' for natural phrasing. 'Helped' is correctly in past simple referring to past improvement. Suggestion: Use 'my' to clarify whose speed and accuracy improved.