打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (like, you know) and grammar errors (use correct verb forms and articles).

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me capture ideas quickly and creatively. For example, when I’m brainstorming, writing by hand feels faster and more spontaneous than typing, which sometimes slows me down as I look for keys.

建議: Give a full sentence with a clear topic sentence and add a specific supporting detail using linking words. Use correct articles and natural phrasing (e.g., “a laptop keyboard”).

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it’s compact and portable. For instance, I can work on the bus or in a café, which is much harder with a desktop keyboard.

建議: Answer directly with a clear time reference and avoid vague fillers like “I guess.” Use correct prepositions and article: “learn to type on a keyboard in Year 7.” Add a short detail about how you learned.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in Year 7. I practised during computer lessons at school and used online exercises to build speed and accuracy.

建議: Use present simple for habitual actions and be specific about methods. Start with a clear statement, then give 1–2 specific techniques with linking words, avoiding repetitions and fillers.

範例: I improve my typing by practising on the keyboard every day. For example, I use online typing programs to do timed drills and accuracy exercises, and I set aside 15 minutes daily to focus on reducing errors.

× I prefer handwriting because I can write something straight away from my mind.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can write something straight away from my mind.

No change needed; sentence is grammatical. The clause 'write something straight away from my mind' is colloquial but not a grammar error in -ing form. Suggestion: consider 'write down my ideas straight away' for clarity.

× Not like typing, because typing use your brains to like type to like, search where the keys are.

✓ I do not like typing because typing makes you think about where the keys are.

Original is a fragmented, colloquial sentence with omitted subject and incorrect verb form 'use' for singular 'typing'. This fits 'sentence structure errors' and 'third person singular issue'. Correction adds subject 'I' and fixes verb agreement: 'typing makes you'. Suggest using concise expressions and avoid filler words like 'like'.

× I type on laptop keyboard because it's compact and more useful than desktop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because it's compact and more useful than a desktop keyboard.

Missing articles before singular countable nouns 'laptop keyboard' and 'desktop keyboard'. English requires 'a' or 'the' before singular countable nouns unless plural or uncountable. Use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop keyboard'.

× I started learning how to type on keyboard on when I was in year 7 I guess.

✓ I started learning how to type on a keyboard when I was in Year 7, I guess.

Redundant preposition 'on' and missing article 'a' cause sentence structure errors. Also 'Year 7' is capitalized as a school year. Remove the extra 'on' and add the article. Comma before 'I guess' improves fluency.

× I improved it by using it by using the typing keyboard every day.

✓ I improved it by using the keyboard every day.

Redundant phrase 'by using it by using' and unnecessary article 'the' before 'typing keyboard'. Simplify to 'using the keyboard every day'. The correction keeps past tense 'improved' and uses a clear gerund phrase 'using the keyboard' to show how improvement occurred.

× Or maybe search up some websites that you can practice typing faster and like more accurately.

✓ Or maybe search for some websites where you can practice typing faster and more accurately.

Use of base verb 'search up' is informal and preposition 'up' is unnecessary; 'search for' is standard. 'That you can practice' should be 'where you can practice' to refer to websites. Remove filler 'like'. Use adverb 'more accurately' to compare accuracy properly.