打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите повторы, избегайте междометий и постарайтесь дать более структурированный ответ: сначала основной тезис, затем 1–2 конкретных примера. Уберите лишние слова («uh», «I do really») и исправьте неточные выражения («type in» → «typing», «dictionary journal» → просто «journal»). Используйте связки (for example, however) чтобы сделать речь плавной.

範例: I prefer typing for quick conversations with friends because it is fast and convenient. However, I enjoy handwriting when I keep a personal journal, for example when I want to reflect on my day or express emotions. This helps me feel more connected to my thoughts.

建議: Уберите повторения и заполнители («yes, yes», «uh», «like») и сформулируйте ответ чётко: одно предложение с основной информацией, затем одно предложение с объяснением. Избегайте неточных формулировок («tap» лучше «type», «most valuable» → «most important»).

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop and sometimes a desktop every day because I work online from home. My laptop is the most important device for my work, so I use it constantly to write emails and documents.

建議: Избегайте нерешительных оборотов («I'm not 100% sure», «uh») — лучше дать приблизительный ответ уверенно. Начните с основной фразы, затем приведите конкретный пример и эмоцию. Уберите разговорные фразы («this thing») и используйте более подходящую лексику («desktop computer», «felt grown-up»).

範例: I learned to type when I was about five or six years old. I used our desktop computer to search for and play games, and I remember feeling very grown-up when I could type on my own.

建議: Дайте более позитивный и структурированный ответ: сначала скажите, что делаете (или не делаете) для улучшения, затем объясните причину и пример. Избегайте неуверенных формулировок и грамматических ошибок («programmist» → «programmer», согласование времен). Можно упомянуть конкретные методы, если есть.

範例: I don't actively take courses to improve my typing because I don't need professional speed, but I do improve naturally. Because I type a lot for work every day, my accuracy and speed have gradually improved over time.

× 'It really depends on what we are talking about.'

✓ 'It really depends on what we are talking about.'

'Present tense is correct here; no change needed. The sentence appropriately uses present continuous to refer to general situations.'

× 'If uh it's chatting with my friends it is 100% type in because nobody uses handwriting or letters to talk to your friends family.'

✓ 'If I am chatting with my friends, I will 100% type because nobody uses handwriting or letters to message their friends or family.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure errors: original mixes subjects and pronouns (we/you) and uses awkward phrasing "type in". Use consistent first person subject "I" and future/modal "will" to express preference. Replace "to talk to your friends family" with "to message their friends or family" for clarity.'

× 'But I do really love handwriting in terms of journaling or expressing your own feelings and emotion in your dictionary journal.'

✓ 'But I really do love handwriting for journaling or expressing my feelings and emotions in my personal journal.'

'Incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives: mix of second person "your" and first person reference. "Emotion" should be plural here and "dictionary journal" is incorrect collocation. Use "my personal journal" and plural "emotions".'

× 'Yes, yes, I do tap on a desktop and laptop keyboard every day because I work online from home and uh, most valuable and uh, like the necessary thing for me is my laptop, which I use everyday and I type yeah.'

✓ 'Yes, I use a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day because I work online from home, and the most important thing for me is my laptop, which I use every day to type.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: "do tap on" is informal and awkward; use "use". "Most valuable and ... necessary thing" is redundant—use "the most important thing". "Everyday" (adjective) should be "every day" (adverb) when meaning each day.'

× 'When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?'

✓ 'When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?'

'Question is correct grammatically and uses past tense appropriately; no change needed.'

× 'Umm, I'm not 100% sure right now telling you this information, but maybe when I was, uh, five or six years old, uh, and uh, I used to type on desktop to find different games to play, uh, on my computer and I felt very grown up when I did this thing.'

✓ 'I am not completely sure, but maybe when I was five or six years old I used to type on a desktop to find different games to play on my computer, and I felt very grown up when I did.'

'Past tense and sentence structure: use "I am not completely sure" instead of awkward "I'm not 100% sure right now telling you this information". Maintain past tense "used to type" and streamline repetition of filler words. "Desktop" needs article "a desktop" and remove redundant phrase "this thing".'

× 'How do you improve your typing?'

✓ 'How do you improve your typing?','

'Question is correct as written and uses present tense appropriately; no change needed.'

× 'I don't think that I need somehow to improve my typing because I'm not a programmist or like a specialist to be the best in it and the skills I have right now, it's pretty enough for me.'

✓ 'I don't think I need to improve my typing because I'm not a programmer or a specialist who needs to be the best, and the skills I have right now are sufficient for me.'

'Sentence structure and word choice errors: "somehow" is misplaced; use "need to improve". "Programmist" is incorrect—use "programmer". Fix subject-verb agreement "skills ... are" and replace "pretty enough" with "sufficient".'

× 'But because I do a lot of typing work, my skills are getting better and better everything, every single day.'

✓ 'But because I do a lot of typing work, my skills are getting better and better every single day.'

'Adverb placement and redundancy: remove redundant "everything" and place "every single day" at sentence end for clarity.'