打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific reasons. Replace incorrect words ("alchemy") and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and use a linking word when giving a reason.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is hard to read. Moreover, typing produces neater, clearer text which makes it easier for others to understand.

建議: Begin with a direct answer, correct article use and verb forms, and avoid redundancies. Use a linking word to explain why and provide one specific detail about convenience.

範例: I usually type on my iPad keyboard every day. This is more convenient than a desktop because I can easily carry it to classes or cafés and type whenever I need to.

建議: Give a clear past-time expression and reduce hesitations. Use one sentence stating when you learned and a second sentence briefly describing your current ability with a reason or example.

範例: I started learning to type at primary school when we had basic computer lessons. However, my typing is still quite slow because I didn't practice regularly.

建議: Provide a clear plan with correct word choice and structure. Use linking words to list methods and give a specific example of a resource or practice routine. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by using online typing websites and apps that offer lessons and timed tests. For example, I practice on a typing site for 20 minutes daily to increase my speed and accuracy.

× For me, I prefer typing than handwriting because my handwriting is alchemy and typing is more clear than handwriting. See and to understand.

✓ For me, I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is illegible and typing is clearer than handwriting. It is easier to see and understand.

The sentence uses wrong comparative structure and incorrect word choice. 'Prefer' should be followed by 'to' not 'than' (preference construction). 'Alchemy' is incorrect for meaning 'hard to read'; use 'illegible'. 'More clear' should be 'clearer' (comparative adjective). The fragment 'See and to understand' is ungrammatical; correct to 'It is easier to see and understand.' Suggestion: use correct collocations (prefer ... to), choose correct adjectives, and use comparative forms.

× I type on my the keyboard in my iPad every day and it is more convenient than time on a desktop or laptop keyboard everyday because I just need to bring my iPad and type it, it's OK.

✓ I type on the keyboard of my iPad every day, and it is more convenient than using a desktop or laptop keyboard because I only need to bring my iPad and type; it's OK.

Preposition and article errors: 'on my the keyboard in my iPad' should be 'on the keyboard of my iPad' or 'on my iPad keyboard'. 'Than time on' is incorrect; compare with 'than using a desktop or laptop keyboard'. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverbial) — use 'every day'. Remove redundant 'it' after 'type'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions (on vs in, of), correct article placement, and 'using' for comparison.

× I type on my the keyboard in my iPad every day and it is more convenient than time on a desktop or laptop keyboard everyday because I just need to bring my iPad and type it, it's OK.

✓ I type on the keyboard of my iPad every day, and it is more convenient than using a desktop or laptop keyboard because I only need to bring my iPad and type; it's OK.

Tense is generally present simple to describe habitual action; original sentence mixes forms but retains present—main issue was redundancy 'time' and awkward phrasing. Use simple present consistently for routines: 'I type', 'it is', 'I only need'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habitual actions and avoid unnecessary words.

× I Start learning to check on the keyboard doing umm primary school and my typing is not good.

✓ I started learning to type on the keyboard in primary school, and my typing is still not good.

Incorrect verb tense and verb choice: 'Start' should be past 'started' because the action began in the past. 'Learning to check on the keyboard doing' is ungrammatical; use 'learning to type on the keyboard'. 'Primary school' needs 'in'. 'Is not good' can be 'is still not good' for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense for actions that began in the past and choose correct verbs ('type').

× I will improve my typing through the typing website and the I can train my speed of tech pack and the.

✓ I will improve my typing through a typing website, and I can train my typing speed there.

The sentence has awkward structure and unnecessary words. Future tense 'I will improve' is fine, but 'the typing website' should be 'a typing website' (article), and 'the I can train my speed of tech pack and the' is garbled. Replace with 'I can train my typing speed there.' Suggestion: use appropriate articles and concise clauses; ensure the second clause clearly refers to how you will practice.

× I will improve my typing through the typing website and the I can train my speed of tech pack and the.

✓ I will improve my typing through a typing website, and I can train my typing speed there.

Pronoun and demonstrative errors: 'the I' is incorrect; use 'and I'. 'There' refers back to the website. Also replace unclear noun phrase 'speed of tech pack' with 'typing speed'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and demonstratives correctly refer to antecedents and remove extra words.