打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: state your preference in one sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choice (e.g., "type in paper" is wrong; use "write on paper" or "handwrite"). Use correct tense and reduce redundancies.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I grew up writing notes by hand, and I find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I handwrite lecture notes, I understand and recall concepts more easily than when I type them.

建議: Answer directly and give specific frequency. Use clear time expressions (e.g., "once or twice a week") and correct grammar. Link clauses with words like "because" or "so" to explain reasons. Replace vague phrases with specific activities.

範例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I only use a computer once or twice a week; most days I write by hand because I prefer the feel of handwriting and it helps me organize my thoughts better.

建議: Give a clear time reference (e.g., "when I was X years old" or "recently") and avoid confusing verbs like "timing". If you haven't formally learned, say so and explain briefly how you practice. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

範例: I never had formal typing lessons; I mostly learned basic keyboard skills recently when I started using a laptop once or twice a week. For instance, two months ago I began practicing touch-typing with online exercises to improve my speed.

建議: Describe concrete methods and use correct collocations: "improve typing" not "type fastly". Give clear steps and timelines, and use linking words like "first", "then", "finally". Be specific about resources (apps, practice routines) and avoid informal slang like "gonna."

範例: To improve my typing, I first practice daily for 15 minutes on an online typing tutor to learn proper finger placement. Then I type short emails or notes on my laptop to build speed, and after a month I plan to increase practice time to 30 minutes a day.

× I would like to type in paper instead of typing in digital accessories or equipments because I was used to type.

✓ I would like to write on paper instead of using digital devices because I am used to typing by hand.

Wrong prepositions and word choice: 'type in paper' should be 'write on paper'; 'typing in digital accessories or equipments' should be 'using digital devices'; 'was used to type' should be 'am used to typing' to express a present habit. Use 'typing by hand' or 'writing by hand' for clarity.

× I was used to type in handwriting in my small age until now, I was used to to write in with handwriting instead of typing.

✓ I was used to writing by hand when I was young, and I still prefer handwriting to typing.

Multiple issues: 'used to' should be followed by a base verb to indicate past habit (I used to write), but here the intended meaning is past continuous preference and current preference: 'was used to writing' or 'used to write'. 'in my small age' is incorrect; use 'when I was young'. 'write in with handwriting' is redundant; use 'writing by hand'. Combine into clearer sentence.

× No, I'm not typing in desktop or a laptop.

✓ No, I don't type on a desktop or a laptop.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I don't type' rather than 'I'm not typing'. Preposition 'on' is correct for keyboard devices. 'a desktop or a laptop' needs article consistency: 'a desktop or a laptop' or better 'a desktop or laptop'.

× Every day I'm typing, but maybe in a week, once or twice at all time.

✓ I don't type every day; maybe once or twice a week at most.

Tense and adverb placement: original mixes present continuous and vague time expressions. Use simple present for habits and correct time phrase 'once or twice a week' and 'at most' instead of 'at all time'.

× I'm typing with my hand and my handwriting.

✓ I write by hand using my handwriting.

Use 'write by hand' rather than 'typing with my hand'. 'Typing' implies using a keyboard; for handwriting use 'write'. Clarify phrase order for natural English.

× I'm working on my handwriting more than typing on digital device.

✓ I work on my handwriting more than on typing on digital devices.

Habitual action should use simple present: 'I work on my handwriting'. Also plural 'devices' and add 'on' before 'typing' for parallel structure.

× I do not study or learn how to timing keyboard.

✓ I did not study or learn how to type on a keyboard.

Wrong verb form: 'timing' is incorrect; use base verb 'type'. Past tense 'did not study' fits context of learning in the past. Preposition 'on a keyboard' is correct.

× As I said, usually I'm typing with my handwriting so I I'm not learning to type in digital devices, but in a week once or twice I'm starting to learn in a desktop or laptop.

✓ As I said, I usually write by hand, so I haven't learned to type on digital devices; but once or twice a week I try to practice on a desktop or laptop.

Pronoun and tense issues: remove duplicated 'I', use present perfect 'haven't learned' to indicate lack of skill up to now, and 'once or twice a week' for frequency. Use 'practice' rather than 'starting to learn' for habitual attempts. Prepositions: 'on a desktop or laptop'.

× And most of the time I'm typing by my handwriting in a paper.

✓ Most of the time I write by hand on paper.

Avoid continuous tense for habitual action; use simple present. Use 'write by hand' and 'on paper' for correct prepositions and natural phrasing.

× In my free times it will persuade me how to type fastly.

✓ In my free time I try to teach myself how to type faster.

'Free times' should be 'free time' and 'will persuade me' is incorrect—use 'I try to teach myself' or 'I practice'. 'Fastly' is not a word; use adverb 'faster'.

× And after this I'm gonna start how to type in a laptop or desktop.

✓ After this, I'm going to start learning how to type on a laptop or desktop.

Use standard future form 'going to' (not 'gonna' in formal writing) plus 'learning how to type'. Preposition 'on' and word order corrected for clarity.