打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and directly state preference with one clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (use present simple and articles). For example, say you prefer typing because of convenience and speed, then give a specific example about messaging or work.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I usually send messages and emails from my phone or laptop, which saves time and lets me communicate with several people at once.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (desktop or laptop), correct pronunciation and verb form mistakes, and avoid filler words. Use one linking phrase to add specific detail (how often, for what tasks).

範例: I type mostly on a laptop every day, although I also use my mobile phone for quick messages. For example, I write reports and emails on my laptop while I text friends and family on my phone.

建議: Give a clear time reference in the topic sentence (e.g., as a child/teenager), avoid hesitations, and provide a short specific detail about who taught you and how you practiced. Use past tense consistently.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a teenager during the pandemic. My brother taught me the basics, and I practised every day on a laptop using online typing exercises.

建議: Answer directly with a clear strategy (practice methods), use linking words (for example, by/also) and correct grammar (possessive and verb forms). Provide one or two specific methods and an example of practice frequency or tools.

範例: You can improve typing by practising regularly; for example, spend 15–20 minutes a day on online typing tests to build speed and accuracy. Also, try practicing touch-typing exercises and using typing games to reduce errors.

× OK, I prefer typing because now people have computer technology.

✓ OK, I prefer typing because people now have computer technology.

Word order is awkward; move 'now' after subject for natural present tense phrasing. The sentence uses present simple to state a general truth, so keep present tense but correct word order.

× They have a computer, laptop, mobile phones.

✓ They have computers, laptops, and mobile phones.

List items should match plurality. Using plural nouns 'computers, laptops, and mobile phones' agrees with plural subject 'they' and sounds natural when referring to devices in general.

× They always try to communicate with their friends.

✓ They are always trying to communicate with their friends.

Both forms are possible, but 'are always trying' emphasizes a habitual ongoing action in present context and matches surrounding continuous actions; present continuous better reflects frequent ongoing behavior.

× With typing, they type to send message.

✓ With typing, they type to send messages.

Count noun 'message' needs plural when speaking generally. The verb structure 'type to send messages' is correct; change 'message' to plural.

× They don't write letter to their friends.

✓ They don't write letters to their friends.

Missing plural for 'letter' when speaking generally. Also include plural 'letters' to match the negative present simple about habitual actions.

× With handwriting, they always do.

✓ They always write letters by hand.

Original is vague and ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: contrast handwriting with typing by stating 'write letters by hand.' Use present simple for habitual action.

× OK, I die.

✓ OK, I do.

The student likely intended 'I do' (meaning 'I do' type on laptop). 'Die' is incorrect verb choice. Use 'do' to answer the question about whether they type on desktop or laptop.

× I die on a laptop most of time I'm in and usually I do a lot of typing on my mobile phone because I am connected with my friends and I am doing work so I have to do type and a lot of things.

✓ I type on a laptop most of the time, and I usually do a lot of typing on my mobile phone because I am connected with my friends and doing work, so I have to type a lot.

Multiple issues: replace wrong verb 'die' with 'type'; add missing articles ('the time'); use parallel gerunds 'doing work' and 'type'; remove redundant 'do' before 'type'; restructure the sentence for clarity and correct present continuous/simple mix.

× OK, I learn, uh, typing non keyboard when I was, uh, when there's a chrono, uh, time.

✓ OK, I learned typing on a keyboard when I was younger.

Use past simple 'learned' to describe a past event. 'Non keyboard' is incorrect — should be 'on a keyboard.' Replace vague clause with 'when I was younger' for natural phrasing.

× So I do typing on laptop at that time because I don't have to go to school and anywhere.

✓ So I typed on a laptop at that time because I did not have to go to school or anywhere else.

Use past tense 'typed' to match time reference. Prepositions: 'on a laptop' and 'go to school or anywhere else' are correct. Use 'did not' for past negative.

× And, uh, so my brother teach me like how to type on keyboard.

✓ And so my brother taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Use past tense 'taught' to match past timeframe and correct verb form. Add article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Remove filler 'like'.

× OK, you can, uh, improve your typing by type because definitely when you type a lot, you're typing will be improved, getting better day by day.

✓ You can improve your typing by practicing, because when you type a lot, your typing will improve and get better day by day.

Use 'practicing' (verb + -ing) rather than 'by type'. Replace 'you're typing will be improved' with 'your typing will improve' for correct possessive pronoun and verb agreement. Use simple present/future result structure for general advice.

× So you can communicate with your friends by typing and do your work on laptop.

✓ You can communicate with your friends by typing and do your work on a laptop.

Add article 'a' before 'laptop' for correctness. Sentence structure otherwise fine.

× And I think do a lot of typing. It will help to improve.

✓ I think doing a lot of typing will help improve it.

Combine fragments into one clear sentence. Use gerund 'doing' after 'think' and remove unnecessary 'to' in 'help to improve' (both 'help improve' and 'help to improve' are possible; 'help improve' is more natural here). Specify 'it' (typing skill) for clarity.