打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct word choice and grammar, and keep within 3–4 clear sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with clear wording. Avoid unclear words (e.g., "knitty", "drug", "often I'm") and ensure sentences are grammatical.

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and lets me organize notes on my phone or computer. For example, I can search, edit, and categorize my notes quickly. I only handwrite when I need to draw a diagram or sketch ideas.

建議: Answer directly and avoid contradicting phrases; use clear linking and a small amount of detail. Correct the phrase "laptop desktop" and reduce repetition. Mention frequency and purpose briefly.

範例: Yes, I use a laptop every day. As an electrical engineer I need it for CAD drawings and reports, and I also use it on weekends for studying and taking notes.

建議: Give a clear time reference and correct grammatical errors. Use one topic sentence stating when, then one supporting detail about how you learned and how practice helped. Fix strange phrases like "1 words", "touch US based" and "work homework."

範例: I learned to type in primary school when I was about eight. The school brought in computer teachers who taught basic typing and computer skills, and regular practice since then has made typing very useful for my schoolwork and now my job.

建議: Be specific about methods and use correct terminology (e.g., "touch typing", "finger placement"). Provide a clear plan with linking words and one or two concrete examples of practice activities and goals.

範例: I practice touch typing for 20 minutes a day using online lessons to fix my finger placement and build speed. I also do timed typing tests weekly to track accuracy and aim to reach 60 words per minute within three months.

× I prefer typing because it's much easier and faster for me and my notes are knitty and easier to organize on my phone or computer.

✓ I prefer typing because it's much easier and faster for me, and my notes are neat and easier to organize on my phone or computer.

'knitty' is not a correct adjective for describing notes. The correct word is 'neat' to mean tidy and well-organized. Also add a comma before 'and' to join the two independent clauses clearly. (Id 13)

× Handwriting takes me longer and can be harder to read, so I only write by hand when I need to sketch a drug often I'm. Memory.

✓ Handwriting takes me longer and can be harder to read, so I only write by hand when I need to sketch a diagram or when I want to remember something.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains corrupted fragments ('drug often I'm. Memory'). Likely intended meanings are 'diagram' and a phrase about memory. Rewriting the sentence to 'sketch a diagram or when I want to remember something' restores coherence and correct sentence structure. (Id 26)

× Because I'm an electrical engineer, I use a laptop computer every day to create technical drawings for my projects.

✓ Because I'm an electrical engineer, I use a laptop every day to create technical drawings for my projects.

'a laptop computer' is grammatically acceptable but wordy. 'a laptop' is more natural. No grammatical error beyond style; categorized under article/word choice for clarity. (Id 22)

× On weekends, I usually don't use a laptop desktop.

✓ On weekends, I usually don't use a desktop computer.

'laptop desktop' is a contradictory phrase combining two device types. The intended meaning is likely 'desktop computer.' Replace with the correct noun phrase to fix pronoun/noun misuse and semantic contradiction. (Id 12)

× I use my laptop to study and type notes.

✓ I use my laptop to study and to type notes.

Parallel structure is improved by repeating 'to' for clarity: 'to study and to type notes.' The original is understandable but the corrected version clarifies parallel infinitives. (Id 26)

× I learned to type 1 words in primary school.

✓ I learned to type one word in primary school.

If the student intended to say 'one word' then writing the numeral '1' in text should be spelled out as 'one' and the singular 'word' matches. If they meant 'how to type' or 'to type words', better: 'I learned to type in primary school.' Use past tense 'learned', which is correct, but fix numeral and noun agreement. (Id 5)

× Our school invited computer teachers who touch US based computer skills, including how to type.

✓ Our school invited computer teachers who taught us basic computer skills, including how to type.

'touch US based' is incorrect. The intended verb is 'taught us' and 'US based' seems intended as 'basic'. Also 'taught us' fixes pronoun and verb choice. Use 'taught us basic computer skills' for clarity and correct article/word choice. (Id 22)

× I practice regularly and found it very useful for my work homework.

✓ I practiced regularly and found it very useful for my schoolwork and my job.

The original mixes present 'practice' with past 'found'. To describe past learning, use past tense 'practiced' and 'found'. Also 'work homework' is incorrect; separate into 'schoolwork' or 'homework' and 'job' depending on intended meaning. Correct to 'schoolwork and my job' or simply 'my work'. (Id 6)

× To be honest, my typing isn't very good right now so I need to practice regularly to learn torch typing and correct a finger placement.

✓ To be honest, my typing isn't very good right now, so I need to practice regularly to learn touch typing and correct my finger placement.

'torch typing' is a misspelling of 'touch typing'. 'a finger placement' should be 'my finger placement' to show possession. Add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Present tense 'isn't' and 'need' are consistent. (Id 6)

× I want to improve my accuracy and speed because I didn't learn it properly when I was younger.

✓ I want to improve my accuracy and speed because I didn't learn it properly when I was younger.

This sentence is grammatically correct: present 'want' to express desire and past 'didn't learn' to explain reason in the past. No correction needed. Included here to acknowledge correctness. (Id 5)