打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la clarté et la précision : évitez les répétitions (« when when »), corrigez les erreurs grammaticales (accords, usage de « neither ») et raccourcissez la réponse à au plus cinq phrases. Ajoutez un lien logique entre l'idée principale et l'exemple (par exemple « for instance ») et utilisez un vocabulaire précis (« edit » plutôt que « delete mistakes » si approprié).

範例: I prefer typing because it is more efficient and faster than handwriting. For instance, when I take notes or write emails, I can quickly edit and reorganize sentences. This saves time and helps me present my ideas more clearly.

建議: Corrigez les erreurs d'expression et de grammaire et soyez plus cohérent : remplacez formulations incorrectes (« ride in a laptop keyboard ») par des phrases simples et claires, utilisez le temps verbal approprié, et expliquez brièvement pourquoi vous tapez chaque jour. Évitez les phrases confuses et limitez-vous à cinq phrases maximum.

範例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because my job requires a lot of email communication. I regularly search for professors' contact details and send them emails to improve my chances of being accepted by a university. This daily typing helps me keep my correspondence organized and professional.

建議: Clarifiez les détails et corrigez le vocabulaire : remplacez « third grade primary school » par une formulation naturelle (« third grade » ou « when I was about eight ») et corrigez « booked me a laptop » (utilisez « bought »). Ajoutez un lien logique entre l'événement et le résultat (par exemple « as a result ») et limitez la réponse à cinq phrases.

範例: I don't remember the exact year, but I learned to type when I was in third grade, around eight years old. My dad bought me a laptop, and I practised by following the keyboard layout and typing sample sentences. As a result, my typing speed and accuracy improved quickly.

建議: Rendez la réponse plus naturelle et précise : corrigez la grammaire et l'ordre des mots, utilisez des expressions naturelles (« take notes on my laptop », « touch typing »), et ajoutez des détails spécifiques sur la fréquence ou les exercices utilisés. Utilisez un lien logique pour structurer l'idée et limitez la réponse à cinq phrases.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice: I take most of my notes on my laptop. I also practise touch typing exercises and try not to look at the keys to increase my speed and accuracy. Additionally, I use online typing tests once a week to track my progress.

× I really prefer typing because it is more efficient and doesn't take as much time as handwriting.

✓ I really prefer typing because it is more efficient and doesn't take as much time as handwriting.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Present participle 'typing' is used appropriately to contrast with 'handwriting.' Suggestion: None.

× For example, when when I'm writing notes or emails, I can just quickly delete mistakes and reorganize my sentences, which make my work neither and faster.

✓ For example, when I'm writing notes or emails, I can quickly delete mistakes and reorganize my sentences, which makes my work neater and faster.

Errors: repeated word 'when when' (sentence structure), subject-verb agreement 'which make' should be 'which makes' (subject 'which' refers to reorganizing sentences, singular), wrong word 'neither' should be 'neater'. Suggestions: remove duplicate 'when', ensure verb agrees with singular subject and choose correct adjective 'neater' to mean tidier; avoid unnecessary adverbs 'just' and place 'quickly' before verb.

× Actually, yes, every day I ride in a laptop keyboard because it is part of my job.

✓ Actually, yes, every day I use a laptop keyboard because it is part of my job.

Errors: 'ride in a laptop keyboard' is incorrect collocation and preposition use. Use verb 'use' with 'a laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: Replace 'ride in' with 'use' and include article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard.'

× I just sent emails to enhance my chances to be accepted in the university.

✓ I send emails to improve my chances of being accepted to the university.

Errors: tense mismatch — 'just sent' implies a single recent action but context describes habitual action, so present simple 'send' is better. Also 'enhance' can be replaced by more natural 'improve', and 'chances to be accepted in the university' should be 'chances of being accepted to the university.' Suggestion: use present simple for habitual activities and correct preposition 'to' for acceptance destination.

× So I really try to search professors and send emails from them.

✓ So I really try to search for professors and send emails to them.

Errors: missing preposition 'for' after 'search' and wrong preposition 'from' should be 'to' when sending emails. Suggestion: use 'search for' and 'send emails to'.

× I don't remember exactly, but I learned to type when I was in the third grade primary school.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I learned to type when I was in third grade at primary school.

Errors: word order and article use — 'the third grade primary school' is awkward. Use 'in third grade' and include 'at' before 'primary school' or say 'in primary school.' Suggestion: simplify to 'in third grade at primary school' or 'in primary school in third grade.'

× My dad booked me a laptop and I practiced typing by following the keyboard layout and making sample sentences, which helped me to improve quickly.

✓ My dad bought me a laptop and I practiced typing by following the keyboard layout and making sample sentences, which helped me improve quickly.

Errors: 'booked' is wrong verb; should be 'bought'. 'Helped me to improve' is acceptable but more natural without 'to'. Suggestion: use 'bought' for purchasing and drop 'to' after 'helped me.'

× I really improve my typing by practicing, so I write like my notes in my laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing, so I write my notes on my laptop.

Errors: unnecessary adverb 'really' can be omitted; phrase 'write like my notes' is incorrect—should be 'write my notes'. Preposition 'in' is wrong for devices: use 'on my laptop.' Suggestion: use 'write my notes on my laptop' to be natural.

× I also try to write without looking at the layout to be more fast and know when where to write.

✓ I also try to write without looking at the layout to be faster and to know where to place my fingers.

Errors: 'more fast' is incorrect comparative; use 'faster.' Phrase 'know when where to write' is unclear. Suggestion: use 'faster' and clarify intention, e.g., 'to know where to place my fingers' or 'to know where to type.'