打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Mention an example or brief consequence to support your point.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and less tiring when I have long texts to write. For example, when I take notes or write emails, typing lets me finish more quickly, and my documents are easier for others to read because my handwriting can be messy.

建議: Begin with a direct answer (desktop, laptop, or not daily). Avoid repetition and streamline explanation. Use linking words (however, so) and give one specific example of current usage frequency.

範例: I don't type on a laptop every day anymore because I left my job, so I only use a laptop occasionally. For instance, I usually type documents once or twice a week when I need to submit forms or send emails.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and complete sentences. Reduce hesitations and add one clear supporting detail about what you learned. Use linking words (for example, during which) to connect ideas.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade school. For example, we had a computer class in which the teacher taught basic typing skills and how to position our fingers correctly.

建議: Answer directly, avoid filler words, and give specific, actionable methods. Use linking phrases (first, then, also) and include an example of a practice routine or resource.

範例: You can improve typing by practicing regularly and learning proper technique. First, do short daily drills for 10–15 minutes to build muscle memory; then use online typing tutors or lessons to improve speed and accuracy, and track your progress with weekly tests.

× I prefer typing now 'cause it's faster and, uh, less tiring if you're using the computer than when you're writing.

✓ I prefer typing now because it's faster and, uh, less tiring to use the computer than to write by hand.

The original mixes comparative structures and prepositions incorrectly. Use parallel infinitive phrases for comparison: 'to use the computer' and 'to write by hand.' Also avoid colloquial 'cause' in formal correction. This maintains clear parallelism and correct preposition/verb forms.

× Also, my penmanship is really not beautiful, so for others to read what I have to write, it's.

✓ Also, my penmanship is not very neat, so others find it hard to read what I write.

'Beautiful' is an odd collocation with 'penmanship'; 'neat' or 'legible' is more appropriate. The original sentence fragments ('so for others to read... it's') are ungrammatical. Rewrite to a complete clause: 'so others find it hard to read what I write.'

× I used to type in a laptop every day during work when I had work, but now that I am no longer in the workforce, I no longer use the laptop.

✓ I used to type on a laptop every day when I was working, but now that I am no longer in the workforce, I don't use the laptop anymore.

Use 'on a laptop' rather than 'in a laptop.' The phrase 'during work when I had work' is redundant; use 'when I was working.' Use 'don't use... anymore' for natural negative present context.

× It's only whenever I need to, whenever I need to submit a document.

✓ I only use it when I need to submit a document.

The original repeats fragments and lacks a clear subject-verb structure. Condense to a single clear present tense clause: 'I only use it when I need to submit a document.'

× I learned how to type in a keyboard when I was in grade school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade school.

Use 'on a keyboard' rather than 'in a keyboard.' 'On' is the correct preposition for typing equipment.

× We used to have a computer subject back then. We're in. The teacher would teach the basics of the computer and how to uh.

✓ We used to have a computer class back then. The teacher would teach the basics of computers and how to use them.

'Computer subject' is awkward; 'computer class' is natural. 'We're in' is an incomplete fragment and should be removed. Complete the final clause: 'how to use them.' Use plural 'computers' or refer to 'the computer' consistently.

× Uh, you improve your typing by practicing. So by practicing your muscle memory works into action, so it gets easier and you can also read about techniques on how you can type faster so.

✓ You improve your typing by practicing, which trains your muscle memory so it becomes easier, and you can also read about techniques to type faster.

The original has punctuation issues, repetitions, and incorrect phrasing ('works into action'). Use a relative clause 'which trains your muscle memory' and 'so it becomes easier.' Replace 'read about techniques on how you can type faster' with 'read about techniques to type faster' for concision and correctness.