打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, articles).

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for most tasks. For example, when I write essays or emails on my laptop I can edit quickly and use spell-check, which saves time.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating which device you use daily, then give one or two specific details about how long or why. Use correct tense and simple linking words (for example, 'because', 'since'). Avoid irrelevant childhood details unless they support the answer briefly.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I study and do most of my homework on my laptop. I have been using a laptop since I was five, so I am comfortable typing quickly and accurately.

建議: Give a direct time reference and a clear short description of the learning process. Use correct past tense and avoid filler words. Mention one specific method or person who helped and the result using linking words (e.g., 'at first...but later...').

範例: I learned to type about five years ago. At first I found it confusing, but my father practiced with me regularly, and over time I became much faster and more confident.

建議: Answer clearly what methods you use to improve typing, give a specific routine or resource, and explain the effect briefly. Keep sentences short and grammatical, and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'so' to connect ideas.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing for about three hours a day in my free time. For example, I use online typing tests and exercises to build speed and accuracy, which has noticeably improved my typing rate.

× Yes, mostly I prefer typing also I think it's really convenient when I typing on the on on my computer with the fast pace.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer typing because I think it's really convenient when I type on my computer at a fast pace.

Original has run-on structure and incorrect conjunction 'also' connecting clauses; 'because' shows reason. 'when I typing' uses incorrect verb form (should be base form after auxiliary), so 'type'. 'on the on on my computer' has repetition and unnecessary article; 'on my computer' is correct. Use 'at a fast pace' for speed expression. Suggestion: break clauses, use correct conjunctions and verb forms.

× However, when it's writing on like a diary, so I think it's just like can write a lot of special thing on it, Yeah.

✓ However, when writing in a diary, I think I can write many special things in it.

'when it's writing' incorrectly uses 'it' and 'writing' with 'it's'; use gerund 'writing' as an activity and correct preposition 'in a diary'. 'so I think it's just like can write' mixes structures; use 'I can write'. 'a lot of special thing' has pluralization and quantifier errors: 'many special things'. Suggestion: use subject performing action and correct noun forms.

× I mostly type on laptop keyboard everyday in the past when was only 5 years old so my dad thought me a laptop and yeah I think I have used it.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop keyboard every day. In the past, when I was only five years old, my dad taught me to use a laptop and since then I have used it a lot.

Missing article before 'laptop keyboard' -> 'a laptop keyboard'. 'everyday' (adjective) should be two words 'every day' (adverb). 'when was only 5 years old' missing subject 'I'. 'thought me a laptop' is wrong verb and structure; correct verb 'taught me to use a laptop'. Sentence run-on; split into two. Suggestion: add articles, correct adverb, include subject, use correct verb 'teach' past 'taught'.

× I have used it a lot of in my study progress and it's making me feel relaxed and more fast.

✓ I have used it a lot in my studies, and it makes me feel relaxed and faster.

'a lot of in' incorrect word order; use 'a lot in my studies'. 'study progress' unnatural; 'my studies' is better. 'it's making me feel relaxed and more fast' uses progressive unnecessarily and wrong adjective 'more fast' -> 'faster'. Suggestion: simplify to present perfect plus simple present effect.

× It's about five years ago so this time I just just like a beginner and I starting to do it.

✓ It was about five years ago, so at that time I was just a beginner and I started to learn typing.

Mix of tenses: 'It's about five years ago' should be past 'It was about five years ago'. 'this time' incorrect reference; use 'at that time'. 'I starting to do it' incorrect form; use past 'I started to learn typing' or 'I started practicing'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent.

× Firstly I think it's so confused on typing a keyboard but after in the R in the long run so my dad have spent his effort taking me so I feel better.

✓ At first I was very confused about typing on a keyboard, but over time my dad spent effort teaching me, so I felt better.

'it's so confused' wrong subject; use 'I was confused'. 'confused on typing a keyboard' wrong preposition; 'about typing on a keyboard'. 'after in the R in the long run' is unclear; use 'over time' or 'in the long run'. 'my dad have spent his effort taking me' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong verbs; use 'my dad spent effort teaching me'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and verbs and clearer time phrases.

× Uh, I think you spoke please to ban on my entertainment and my effort that I put in typing a computer.

✓ I think I should reduce distractions in my free time and focus my effort on typing practice on the computer.

Original is incoherent: 'you spoke please to ban on my entertainment' unclear. Likely intended to say reduce entertainment or distractions. 'typing a computer' incorrect object; 'typing on the computer'. Rearrange into clear structure: state plan and focus. Suggestion: use clear subjects and verbs and natural collocations like 'reduce distractions' and 'focus on typing practice'.

× And yeah, mostly I think I use a method about spending three hours a day, uh, on my free time typing it, typing on the computer keyboard.

✓ I usually follow a method of spending three hours a day in my free time typing on the computer keyboard.

'mostly I think I use a method about' awkward; use 'I usually follow a method of'. 'three hours a day, uh, on my free time' incorrect preposition; 'in my free time'. 'typing it, typing on the computer keyboard' redundant. Suggestion: streamline phrase order and use correct prepositions.

× This way I keep me active.

✓ This way I stay active.

'I keep me active' is ungrammatical reflexive use; do not use 'me' with 'keep' here. Also 'stay active' is natural. Suggestion: use 'stay' or 'keep myself active' if reflexive: 'I keep myself active'.