打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid informal fragments and filler words, and give one specific example that supports your preference. Use linking words to contrast handwriting and typing.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I study for exams I write summary notes by hand, which helps me recall facts more easily. However, I use typing for quick digital notes or when I need to share information quickly online.

建議: Begin with a direct answer and avoid repetition and fillers. Keep sentences clear and link the cause (studying computer science) to the effect (using a laptop daily). Include one specific activity to illustrate frequency.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard almost every day. Since I started studying computer science, I use my laptop for programming assignments and research, so I practice typing frequently for coding and writing reports.

建議: Provide a clear time frame and more precise wording. Remove hesitations and correct vocabulary (use 'computer lab' or 'keyboard' instead of 'cubicle'). Mention one specific teaching method or activity to make the answer richer.

範例: I learned to type in a computer lab when I was about 11 or 12. In those lessons our teacher taught touch-typing techniques and we practiced with timed exercises, which helped me develop speed and accuracy.

建議: Answer directly, avoid hesitation markers, and give specific strategies. Mention measurable or concrete practice methods (timed tests, typing software, coding) and a result to show progress.

範例: I improve my typing through regular practice. For example, I code daily and use online typing tests and practice programs for 15–20 minutes, which has steadily increased my speed and reduced errors.

× I generally prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and it helps me remember of things better.

✓ I generally prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and it helps me remember things better.

The preposition 'of' after 'remember' is incorrect. In English, 'remember' is followed directly by the object (remember things) or by 'to' plus verb (remember to do something). Remove 'of' to correct the sentence. Suggestion: Use 'remember things' or 'remember doing something' depending on meaning.

× Gonna take study notes.

✓ I usually take study notes.

'Gonna' is an informal contraction of 'going to' and is not appropriate as a standalone verb here. The sentence also lacks a subject. Use a full subject and correct verb form: 'I usually take study notes.' This fits the present habitual meaning.

× With that being said, I still use typing when I need to write quick little share notes digitally.

✓ That said, I still use typing when I need to write quick little shared notes digitally.

'With that being said' is wordy; 'That said' is more natural. 'Use typing' is awkward—better to say 'type.' Also 'share notes' should be 'shared notes' (adjective form). Suggested correction uses 'type' or 'use typing' replaced by 'type' and fixes adjective form. Suggestion: 'That said, I still type when I need to write quick, little shared notes digitally.'

× But I've never had a PC when I was growing up.

✓ I didn't have a PC when I was growing up.

The present perfect 'I've never had' conflicts with the past time reference 'when I was growing up.' Use the simple past 'didn't have' for past situations. Also starting with 'But' is unnecessary; remove for formality.

× But ever since I started majoring in computer science, I use my laptop keyboard, umm, a lot more often, almost everyday.

✓ Ever since I started majoring in computer science, I have used my laptop keyboard a lot more often, almost every day.

The phrase 'ever since' with a past starting point requires present perfect ('have used') to show a continuing situation. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). Remove filler 'umm' and unnecessary commas.

× And uh, I use it for research purposes or simply getting my hands on some computer projects.

✓ I use it for research purposes or simply to work on some computer projects.

The phrase 'getting my hands on' is informal and usually means obtaining; to express working on projects use 'to work on.' Also maintain parallel structure: 'for research purposes or to work on projects.' Remove filler 'uh.'

× Well, I learned how to type on a cubicle when I was 11 or 12.

✓ Well, I learned how to type at a cubicle when I was 11 or 12.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'cubicle.' Use 'at a cubicle' to indicate location. Alternatively, use 'on a computer in a cubicle' if meaning was different.

× I remember we had a simple computer classes, uh, in our, uh, curriculum.

✓ I remember we had simple computer classes in our curriculum.

The noun phrase 'a simple computer classes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'classes.' Remove 'a' to match plural or change to 'a simple computer class.' Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas.

× So every now and then, uh, I have to get my fingers on computer keyboards and our teacher would show us how to do that better.

✓ So every now and then I had to use computer keyboards, and our teacher would show us how to do it better.

'Have to get my fingers on' is informal and awkward; 'had to use' suits past habitual actions. Tense consistency: 'when I was 11 or 12' is past, so use past ('had to') and past habitual 'would show.' Also 'do that better' is vague—'do it better' or 'type better.' Remove filler 'uh.'

× But I guess it's the only way to improve typing is regular practice.

✓ I guess the only way to improve typing is regular practice.

Starting with 'But' is unnecessary. The sentence also has redundancy: 'I guess it's the only way to improve typing is' should be streamlined to 'I guess the only way to improve typing is regular practice.' Alternatively: 'I guess the only way to improve my typing is through regular practice.'

× Since I bought my laptop, I've started getting my hands on computer projects and I type in English a lot more often, almost every day, and that's steady practice has helped my speed and accuracy.

✓ Since I bought my laptop, I have started working on computer projects and I type in English a lot more often, almost every day, and that steady practice has helped my speed and accuracy.

Replace informal 'getting my hands on' with 'working on.' Use present perfect 'have started' is acceptable with 'since' but ensure subject-verb agreement: 'that steady practice has helped' (remove erroneous 's). Also 'that's steady practice' should be 'that steady practice.' Ensure clarity and remove extra commas.