打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitation and repetition; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Use linking words (because, so) smoothly and avoid filler words like "umm".

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer at school every day, so typing is faster. For example, I can finish essays more quickly and easily correct mistakes with the keyboard.

建議: Give a concise direct answer first, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repeating the same idea and reduce hesitations. Correctly name the device (desktop or laptop).

範例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day at school. We use the desktops to complete and submit homework online, so I’m comfortable with that setup.

建議: State the time clearly, then explain briefly how you learned with one or two details. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers; use past tense consistently.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had a weekly computer class where the teacher assigned typing exercises, so I practiced regularly and became faster.

建議: Answer directly, then describe the method with specific detail and a result. Keep sentences compact and avoid repeating words.

範例: I improve my typing with a practice app that turns exercises into games. It tracks my speed and accuracy, so by playing regularly I’ve increased my words-per-minute and made fewer mistakes.

× I prefer typing because I usually use computer umm in my school, so I prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing because I usually use a computer at my school, so I prefer typing.

The original sentence omits the article 'a' before 'computer' and uses the preposition 'in' incorrectly with 'school'. Use 'a computer' (article error + countable singular) and 'at my school' (correct preposition for location). Improve by remembering singular countable nouns need an article and common locations use 'at'.

× It's much easier to type umm, a lot of umm, many words.

✓ It's much easier to type a lot of words.

The phrase combined 'a lot of' and 'many' together is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'a lot of words' or 'many words'. Here 'a lot of words' fits the informal spoken register. Remove duplicated quantifiers.

× Yeah, I do type on a desktop every day.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop every day.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in this affirmative statement; use the simple present 'I type'. Using 'do' is acceptable for emphasis, but 'Yeah, I do type...' sounds odd here. Also 'Yeah' to 'Yes' is formality choice.

× Next desktop keyboard every day.

✓ I use a desktop keyboard every day.

The original is a sentence fragment missing a verb and subject. Complete the sentence with subject 'I' and verb 'use' to form a grammatical statement.

× Umm, my school, in my school, umm, we usually use umm, the lap, umm, desktop keyboard every day to submit our homework.

✓ At my school we usually use desktop keyboards every day to submit our homework.

The phrase is repetitive and contains incorrect 'the lap' fragment. Use 'At my school' as the correct prepositional phrase, plural 'desktop keyboards' to agree with 'we', and remove filler words. This fixes preposition use, plural agreement, and removes unnecessary article 'the'.

× When I was in elementary school, we often have a compu umm, computer class.

✓ When I was in elementary school, we often had a computer class.

The time adverbial 'When I was in elementary school' requires past tense. Change 'have' to past tense 'had'. Also remove filler.

× So umm, Part 1 day, part a week.

✓ It was held once a week for part of the day.

The original fragment is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrase to a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning: that the class met part of the day once a week. Use a clear subject and verb.

× So I used to, I used to type a lot of words there.

✓ I used to type a lot of words there.

Repetition 'I used to, I used to' is redundant. Keep a single 'I used to' to indicate a past habitual action. This corrects redundancy and maintains past tense.

× We had an app to practice a typing skill, so I usually do it and it's a fun game so it's too it's we can practice and improve our typing skills by using that game and enjoy.

✓ We had an app to practice typing skills, so I usually used it; it's a fun game that lets us practice and improve our typing skills and enjoy it.

Multiple issues: 'a typing skill' is unnatural—use 'typing skills' (plural) and no article. Tense consistency: 'We had' (past) pairs with 'usually used' (past habit). Original mixed tenses and fragments; rephrase to link clauses properly. Replace 'it's too it's we can' with 'it lets us' for clarity and grammaticality.