打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and clear, but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Improve grammar (e.g., article use, comparative forms), reduce filler phrases, and make sentences more natural and concise. Use one clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with linking words.

範例: I prefer typing because it’s more convenient and produces neater work. For example, typing lets me edit quickly and saves time, so my assignments look cleaner and I can practice my keyboard skills.

建議: Your response answers the question but has repetition, grammar mistakes (e.g., 'almost' used twice, 'to done'), and awkward phrasing. Use one topic sentence and then a concise reason with linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repeating words.

範例: I mostly type on a desktop because I’m a high school student and use it daily. For instance, I do my homework and school projects on my desktop, which has a full keyboard and better performance than my phone.

建議: Good content (age and context), but improve tense consistency, remove fillers like 'umm' and 'apparently', and use correct verb forms. Make one clear sentence stating the age and a second giving the context with linking words.

範例: I first learned to type when I was ten years old. At primary school, my IT teacher showed us proper typing techniques during computer lessons.

建議: Your answer lists an approach but has unclear phrasing ('2/2 hour', 'by 10 fingers') and grammar errors. Be specific about practice routine, use correct plural/singular forms, and add linking words. Mention measurable practice and other methods (online exercises, posture) to enrich the answer.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: I spend about two hours a day doing typing exercises on my desktop. In addition, I use online typing tests to track my speed and focus on using all ten fingers correctly to increase accuracy.

× I do prefer typing because I think it is convenient to me.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it is convenient for me.

Use 'convenient for' rather than 'convenient to' when saying something suits a person. Also 'do' is unnecessary for a simple preference; remove it for natural speech.

× When I'm typing, I can practice my typing skill and it is more faster and cleaner instead of handwriting.

✓ When I'm typing, I can practice my typing skills and it is faster and cleaner than handwriting.

'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills' to sound natural. 'More faster' is incorrect because 'faster' already expresses comparative; remove 'more'. Use 'than' to compare, not 'instead of', so 'cleaner than handwriting' is correct.

× I almost type on a desktop for almost every day because I'm currently a high school student so I spend a lot of time on my desktop to done my assignment and some projects.

✓ I almost always type on a desktop every day because I'm currently a high school student, so I spend a lot of time on my desktop doing my assignments and some projects.

Use 'almost always' or 'almost' with correct position; 'for almost every day' is incorrect. Use 'every day' (two words). 'to done' is wrong; the verb should be in the gerund form 'doing'. 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' if referring to multiple tasks.

× The first time I learned how to type on a keyboard it is when I was 10 years old.

✓ The first time I learned how to type on a keyboard was when I was 10 years old.

Mixing past ('learned') with present 'it is' is incorrect. Use past tense 'was' to match 'learned' and the time reference.

× Umm, apparently when I'm studying primary school in some IT lessons my teacher teach me how to type.

✓ When I was in primary school, in some IT lessons my teacher taught me how to type.

Tense should be past ('was studying' -> 'was' or simply 'When I was in primary school') and verb agreement: 'teacher teach' must be 'teacher taught' (past). Also reorder phrase for natural English: 'When I was in primary school, in some IT lessons my teacher taught me how to type.'

× There are some ways that I usually improve my typing.

✓ There are several ways that I usually use to improve my typing.

'Some ways that I usually improve my typing' is awkward. Use 'several ways' or 'some ways' plus 'that I use to improve' to show purpose. This clarifies the relationship between 'ways' and 'improve'.

× Firstly, I spend about 2/2 hour per days on typing on a desktop and I usually type by 10 fingers more smoothly.

✓ Firstly, I spend about half an hour per day typing on a desktop, and I usually type smoothly using all ten fingers.

'2/2 hour' is unclear; use 'half an hour'. 'Per days' should be 'per day' or 'every day'. 'Type by 10 fingers' is unnatural; say 'using all ten fingers'. Place adverb 'smoothly' after verb for correct adverb placement.