打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise: state preference in a single topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictions and reduce filler words (uh, well). Use correct collocations (e.g. “time-saving” not “time consuming”).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more time-saving and easier to edit. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange paragraphs without leaving messy marks. Also, typed notes are easier to store and search on my computer.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one clear reason and a brief example. Avoid repetition (e.g. “I used to type every day” repeated) and grammar errors (use present simple: “I type”).

範例: I type on my laptop every day because my employer provides one for office work. For example, I prepare reports and answer emails on the laptop, so I need to use the keyboard throughout the day.

建議: Give a clear time reference and a concise explanation. Use correct tense (simple past for a completed time) and avoid vague phrases. If you mention two different learning stages, link them logically with words like “initially” and “later”.

範例: I learned formal typing at university during my graduation, when I took a computer course. However, I had been using keyboards informally earlier, for example on my smartphone from about ninth grade.

建議: Give a clear method and a short specific example. Use linking words (“for example”, “also”) but avoid excessive hesitation and incomplete sentences. Mention measurable practice strategies (timed drills, accuracy focus).

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do timed drills where I try to type 100 words in ten minutes and focus on accuracy, and I also use online typing programs to track my speed and mistakes.

× I do prefer typing because it's time consuming.

✓ I prefer typing because it's less time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also 'do prefer' is unnecessary emphasis; use 'prefer'. To compare, add 'less' to indicate typing takes less time than handwriting if that is intended. Use consistent adjective form and hyphenation.

× It's not a time consuming at the same time.

✓ It is not time-consuming at the same time.

Remove the article 'a' before the adjective phrase 'time-consuming' because 'time-consuming' is used predicatively and does not need an article. Keep hyphenation. The phrase 'at the same time' is awkward; consider 'on the other hand' or omit it for clarity.

× Well, I'm typing.

✓ Well, I type.

The present continuous 'I'm typing' suggests an action happening now; in this context the student is describing a habitual preference, so the simple present 'I type' is more appropriate. Use tense that matches general statements.

× I can edit or rewrite the passes or whatever I want to write without any correction showing in the graphs, however.

✓ I can edit or rewrite passages or whatever I want to write without tracked corrections showing, however.

'Passes' is incorrect; likely intended 'passages'. 'Without any correction showing in the graphs' is unclear—'tracked corrections showing' or 'marks showing corrections' is clearer. Reorder to place 'however' appropriately (preferably at clause start or end). Correct word choice and clarity.

× I do type on my laptop every day because in my office I was provided with the laptop.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because my office provided me with one.

'Do type' is unnecessary emphasis; use simple present 'I type' for habitual actions. 'I was provided with the laptop' is passive and wordy; active voice 'my office provided me with one' is clearer. Use 'one' rather than repeating 'the laptop'.

× I used to type every day.

✓ I type every day.

'Used to' indicates a past habitual action that no longer occurs. The context says the student currently types daily, so use simple present 'I type every day.' Use 'used to' only for past habits that no longer apply.

× For example, I used to do my works every single work that I have to use the keyboard.

✓ For example, I do all my work using the keyboard every day.

'Used to do my works every single work' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'do all my work' for noncount 'work' and 'using the keyboard' to show the method. Keep tense consistent (simple present) for habitual actions.

× So that's why I have to type every day.

✓ That is why I have to type every day.

Starting a sentence with 'So' is informal; 'That is why' is clearer. The sentence is otherwise grammatically acceptable; minor stylistic adjustment.

× I have learned typing on a keyboard in my graduation days.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard during my university years.

'Have learned' is present perfect, which is less appropriate with a specific past period 'graduation days'. Use simple past 'learned.' Also change 'graduation days' to 'university years' or 'during my degree' and use 'learned to type' or 'learned typing.'

× it was the official use of a keyboard, but I have used keyboard since I used my smartphone back in when I was the standard 9 from them, uh, from them I.

✓ It was the first time I used a keyboard for official work, but I have used keyboards since I started using a smartphone when I was in ninth grade.

The original has incorrect prepositions and word order. Use 'the first time I used a keyboard for official work' and 'since I started using a smartphone' to express continued use. 'When I was in ninth grade' is the correct prepositional phrase. Avoid repetition like 'from them.'

× From my perspective view, I think improving typing is only based on your practice.

✓ From my perspective, I think improving your typing depends entirely on practice.

'Perspective view' is redundant; use 'perspective' alone. 'Improving typing is only based on your practice' is awkward—'improving your typing depends on practice' is clearer and more natural. Use possessive 'your typing.'

× For example, if you, uh, keep, uh, typing on basis of time, like if you set a time that in time in 10 minutes, I have to type 100 words and this kind of setup and, uh, you will.

✓ For example, if you keep practicing timed typing, such as setting a goal to type 100 words in 10 minutes, this kind of setup will help you improve.

Use 'practicing timed typing' instead of 'typing on basis of time.' Rephrase the clause to show purpose and result. The original has sentence fragments and unclear reference 'and you will.' Provide a complete clause showing the outcome. Use clearer word order and concise phrasing.