打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "when I was in high school", "I prefer to type"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer typing nowadays because most of my work and communication is digital. For example, I send emails and take notes on my laptop and phone, so typing is faster and more convenient than handwriting.

建議: Open with a clear statement (desktop during weekdays, phone at weekends). Improve grammatical accuracy ("patient information", "from Monday to Friday") and shorten redundant phrases. Add one specific detail about your work to support your answer.

範例: I usually type on a desktop from Monday to Friday because I work at a hospital and enter patient information into the medical records system. On weekends I mostly use my phone for quick messages and social media.

建議: Give a clear time reference and correct grammar ("when I was in primary school"). Use linking words and be specific about what you learned and how skilled you were then. Keep it brief and natural.

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school as part of our computer classes. At that time I could do basic typing but I wasn't very fast or accurate yet.

建議: Start with a concise topic sentence and give a specific example of how you practice. Remove fillers like "uh" and "umm". Mention a method (timed tests, accuracy practice) and a result to show effectiveness.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day at work, entering patient records which helps my speed and accuracy. I also use short typing tests online for 10 minutes a day to monitor my progress.

× I used to like handwriting a lot when I was high school or when I was younger, but now today I prefer to type in because nowadays everything is changing to typing even though computer, laptop or move my phone. So we have to move ourselves into the.

✓ I used to like handwriting a lot when I was in high school or when I was younger, but today I prefer to type because nowadays everything is changing to typing on computers, laptops, or phones. So we have to adapt.

Error: missing plural forms and incorrect noun phrases (high school needs preposition 'in'; 'computer, laptop or move my phone' is ungrammatical and pluralization needed). Suggestion: use 'in high school', pluralize devices as 'computers, laptops, or phones', use 'adapt' instead of 'move ourselves into the'.

× Most of the time I'm typing on the desktop the most Monday to Friday because I'm working in the hospital and I have to type the my patient informations on the desktop. But on the weekends, uh, not really. I just type in on my phone.

✓ Most of the time I type on the desktop from Monday to Friday because I work in the hospital and I have to type my patients' information on the desktop. But on the weekends I usually do not; I just type on my phone.

Errors: incorrect article use ('the desktop' twice is unnecessary), redundant words ('the most'), wrong verb tense forms (use simple present for habitual actions), incorrect plural/possessive ('patient informations' should be 'patients' information' and 'information' is uncountable). Suggestion: use simple present 'I type' and correct possessive plural for 'patients'.

× So I learned how to type things when I bought primary school. When I was in primary school they have the computer subjects so we have to learn how to type and use the keyboard. But I haven't fluent to use it then.

✓ I learned how to type when I started primary school. When I was in primary school they had computer classes, so we had to learn how to type and use the keyboard. But I wasn't fluent at using it then.

Errors: wrong verb choice 'bought' instead of 'started', inconsistent past tense ('they have' should be 'they had'), wrong adjective/adverb form ('haven't fluent' incorrect; use 'wasn't fluent' and correct preposition 'at using'). Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct collocations: 'computer classes', 'wasn't fluent at using it'.

× My typing has been improved by practice, uh, every single day. Umm, because I have to type every day at the hospital. So I call ASAP practice every day because it's improving automatically. Because, uh, it's part of my job.

✓ My typing has improved with practice every single day because I have to type daily at the hospital. So I practice as often as possible every day, and it improves automatically because it's part of my job.

Errors: unnatural passive 'has been improved by practice' better as 'has improved with practice'; awkward phrase 'I call ASAP practice' incorrect; tense and adverb placement issues. Suggestion: use present perfect 'has improved' for gradual change, use 'practice as often as possible' or 'practice every day' for clarity, and place adverbs appropriately.