打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetitions and incorrect phrases (e.g. "you are handwriting").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and neater. For example, at work I often type reports and emails, which helps me complete many tasks quickly.

建議: Give a direct answer then add one clear, specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and correct unnatural phrases (e.g. "two up job"). Keep to 2–3 short sentences.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for my job. For example, I use it to fill in forms and complete spreadsheets while travelling between sites.

建議: Clarify the timeline and avoid contradictions. Begin with a clear statement of when you learned, then give one specific detail about how and why it improved your skills. Use past tense consistently.

範例: I first learned basic typing at an IT school when I was a teenager, but I improved my skills mainly on the job. For instance, my first job required frequent data entry, which helped me become much faster and more confident.

建議: Answer in present tense about current practices to improve. Give specific methods (practice exercises, software, daily routines) and use linking words like "so" or "therefore." Keep sentences short and avoid filler words.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and software. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day on speed drills, which has noticeably increased my accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because it's more it's faster than you are handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you are handwriting' and repeated clauses 'it's more it's'. Replace with 'it is' and 'handwriting' as a noun. Remove unnecessary second 'it's' and incorrect second-person pronoun. Suggestion: say 'it is faster than handwriting.'

× Sometimes when I am at work I used to handwriting, but it's not usually to do that because I have my own notebook and I have many tasks to do typing.

✓ Sometimes when I was at work I used to handwrite, but I don't usually do that because I have my own notebook and many typing tasks to do.

'Used to handwriting' is incorrect: 'used to' should be followed by a base verb (used to handwrite) or use past simple. 'Handwriting' as a noun is wrong here; use 'handwrite' (verb). 'It's not usually to do that' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't usually do that.' Reorder 'many tasks to do typing' to 'many typing tasks to do.'

× I do type on a laptop because it's my two up job, you know, I used it to do my tasks as I said before at work and I had many things to do that for example repetition or write a form or a sheet and do.

✓ I type on a laptop because it is my work computer; I use it to do my tasks at work, for example repetition, filling out forms, or working with spreadsheets.

Use simple present 'I type' instead of 'I do type' for habitual actions. 'My two up job' is unclear; replace with 'my work computer' or 'laptop for work.' 'I used it to do my tasks' should be 'I use it to do my tasks' for present habit. 'Write a form or a sheet and do' is unclear; specify 'filling out forms or working with spreadsheets.' Keep tense consistent.

× I learned it by myself because when I was a boy, I went into an IT school to learn it.

✓ I learned it by myself; when I was a boy I went to an IT school to learn it.

Use 'went to' rather than 'went into' for attending a school. The original mixes clauses awkwardly; semicolon or conjunction clarifies sequence. Tense 'learned' is correct past.

× But when I got my first job, I learned it by myself.

✓ When I got my first job, I improved my skills by practicing by myself.

Repeating 'learned it by myself' is redundant. Clarify that on the job practice improved ability. Keep past tense 'got' and 'practiced' or 'improved' consistent.

× It was the experience that makes me that made me feel more able to do that, you know, and it was fantastic because along my my career.

✓ That experience made me feel more capable of doing it, and it was fantastic for my career.

Mixed tenses and redundant phrases: 'was the experience that makes me that made me' is incorrect. Use simple past 'made me' and 'more capable' instead of 'more able.' 'Along my my career' is awkward; use 'for my career.' Remove duplicate 'my.'

× I improved my typing, as I said before by myself and uh, during my career, by the time, you know, it was fantastic because when I was 25 years old, I was not able to, uh, type fast.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing on my own during my career; for example, when I was 25 I could not type quickly.

Maintain past tense and simplify: 'I improved my typing by practicing on my own during my career.' 'By the time' is unnecessary. Use 'could not type quickly' rather than 'was not able to, type fast.' Avoid fillers 'uh' and 'you know.'

× But nowadays I can do it more easy and it's.

✓ But nowadays I can do it more easily.

Use adverb 'easily' not adjective 'easy' to modify the verb 'do.' Remove incomplete trailing 'and it's.' Ensure sentence is complete and uses present ability 'can.'