打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with correct tense and vocabulary. Use linking words like 'however' or 'although' properly, and avoid unclear phrases such as 'light on my screen'.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and easier to edit. However, I sometimes make many typing mistakes, especially when I type quickly. To reduce errors, I proofread my notes after each class.

建議: Begin with a direct answer naming the device, then give a specific reason. Fix grammar (e.g. 'keep up with the lecture', 'take notes') and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas. Provide a brief detail about how typing helps (e.g. faster, searchable notes).

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I attend fast-paced university lectures and need to keep up. Typing lets me record more information quickly, and I can later organize and search my notes on the computer.

建議: Give a clear timeline and describe the learning process with correct tenses. Use linking words such as 'at first' and 'eventually', but correct grammar (e.g. 'it was difficult', 'it took a lot of time', 'I eventually learned'). Keep it concise and specific about what helped you improve.

範例: I learned to type in high school. At first it was very difficult and it took a lot of practice, but eventually I became much faster by doing regular drills and typing practice exercises.

建議: Answer in present tense if you still improve, or past tense if it was in the past. Be specific about methods you used (timed exercises, typing games, lessons) and the results. Use clear linking words and correct grammar, avoid repetition.

範例: I improved my typing by doing daily practice sessions and using online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. Practicing for 20–30 minutes a day helped me increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing because it is faster than I'm writing on my hand by my hand.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting.

The original sentence mixes present continuous and awkward phrasing. The comparison should use a noun ('handwriting') or gerund ('writing by hand') rather than 'I'm writing on my hand by my hand'. Use parallel structures when comparing: 'faster than handwriting' or 'faster than writing by hand'. Suggestion: use 'handwriting' or 'writing by hand' for clarity.

× However, I often make a lot of mistake when I use typing.

✓ However, I often make a lot of mistakes when I type.

There is a count noun error and verb form issue. 'a lot of' requires a plural noun 'mistakes'. Also 'use typing' is incorrect; the verb should be 'type'. Keep verb tense present simple for habitual actions: 'I often make' and 'when I type'. Suggestion: say 'make a lot of mistakes when I type.'

× It is difficult to accurately light on my screen by using type.

✓ It is difficult to see accurately on my screen when I type.

The verb choice and word order are wrong: 'light on my screen' is incorrect, and 'by using type' should be 'when I type'. Place the adverb 'accurately' after the verb or before the object: 'see accurately' or 'accurately see'. Use 'see' for screen visibility. Suggestion: 'It is difficult to see accurately on my screen when I type.'

× Yes, I do, because when I take university classes it is difficult to keep with the lecture.

✓ Yes, I do, because when I attend university classes it is difficult to keep up with the lecture.

The verb 'take' is acceptable but 'attend' is more natural here. The phrase 'keep with the lecture' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'keep up with'. Use 'keep up with the lecture' to mean following the lecture pace. Suggestion: 'keep up with the lecture'.

× All teachers speak so fast, so I often use keyboard to take a note and write many words.

✓ All the teachers speak so fast, so I often use a keyboard to take notes and write many words.

Article and count noun errors: 'All teachers' is okay but 'All the teachers' is more natural in this context. 'use keyboard' needs an article: 'use a keyboard'. 'take a note' should be plural 'take notes' for general activity. 'write many words' is grammatically okay but could be 'write many words down' or 'write a lot of words'. Suggestion: 'use a keyboard to take notes.'

× I learned it when I was in high school.

✓ I learned it when I was in high school.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no change. It matches the context of a past action. Suggestion: no change needed.

× At first I felt it is difficult to overcome the difficulty.

✓ At first I felt it was difficult to overcome the difficulty.

The sentence mixes past perception with a present-tense clause 'it is difficult'. When reporting past feeling, use past tense consistently: 'felt it was difficult'. Suggestion: keep tense consistency when describing past experiences.

× It take it took a lot of time to cope with these typing issues, but finally I can do it.

✓ It took a lot of time to cope with these typing issues, but finally I could do it.

Redundant words 'It take it took' must be reduced to 'It took'. Also maintain past tense throughout: 'finally I could do it' or 'I was finally able to do it'. 'Can' is present tense and should be changed to past 'could' or 'was able to'. Suggestion: 'It took a lot of time ... but finally I was able to do it.'

× Well, I practiced a lot when I was in high school.

✓ Well, I practiced a lot when I was in high school.

This sentence is correct; past simple 'practiced' fits the context. No change required. Suggestion: no change needed.

× It was the first time I had used computer.

✓ It was the first time I had used a computer.

Missing indefinite article before the singular countable noun 'computer'. Use 'a computer'. The past perfect 'had used' is correct for describing an action before another past moment. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'computer'.

× However, I used it and I spent a lot of time typing on the laptop.

✓ However, I used it a lot and spent a lot of time typing on the laptop.

The original coordination is awkward: 'I used it and I spent a lot of time' is acceptable but repetitive. Combine actions more smoothly: 'I used it a lot and spent a lot of time typing on the laptop.' Keep past tense consistent. Suggestion: combine phrases to avoid repetition.

× It makes me it enable me to overcome.

✓ It helped me overcome it.

The original phrase 'It makes me it enable me to overcome' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use past tense 'helped' to match earlier past context and a simple structure 'helped me overcome it'. Suggestion: 'It helped me overcome it.'