打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g. "touched type" → "touch-type"), and limit to up to 4–5 sentences. Add one specific reason or short example to support your preference and use a linking word for flow.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more comfortable. For example, after I replaced my old keyboard with a mechanical one and learned to touch-type, I can type without looking and complete emails and reports much quicker. Therefore, typing suits my daily tasks better.

建議: Good detail and organization but tighten language and fix small grammar errors (e.g. "includes" → "include", "doesn't" → "don't", plural agreement). Use a clear topic sentence naming which you use most every day, then briefly contrast others with linking words (e.g. "however", "while").

範例: I use all three regularly, but the mini PC is my primary daily machine for office work and creative tasks. The desktop is reserved for demanding jobs like gaming and video editing, while the laptop is mainly for meetings because of its good webcam.

建議: The answer does not address the question. Begin with a direct response indicating when (e.g. age, school, or year) you learned to type, then add a brief supporting detail about how you practiced. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "when" or "since".

範例: I learned to touch-type when I was about 14 at school. Since then, I practised regularly by typing essays and later by doing a lot of computer-based work, which helped me improve speed and accuracy.

建議: Correct word choice and grammar ("diaping" → "typing", "everyday" → "every day", "softwares" → "software"). Start with a clear topic sentence describing your main method, then give 1–2 specific techniques or examples (e.g. typing drills, online tests, short daily routines). Use linking words such as "for example" or "also".

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. For example, I spend 15 minutes on online typing drills to work on speed and accuracy, and I often use keyboard shortcuts while working to become more efficient.

× I touched type so I can type without looking.

✓ I touch-type so I can type without looking.

The verb phrase 'touch type' is incorrect; the correct form is the hyphenated verb 'touch-type' (third person or base form depending on subject). Use 'touch-type' as a verb phrase to describe the ability. Suggestion: use 'I touch-type' or 'I can touch-type.' Note: This correction aligns with present tense description of ability.

× My fingers have already memorized the keys, which makes typing much faster and more comfortable than writing.

✓ My fingers have already memorized the keys, which makes typing much faster and more comfortable than handwriting.

The comparison uses 'writing' which can be interpreted broadly; 'handwriting' is the more precise noun contrasting with 'typing.' Also pronoun use is acceptable but clarity improved by using the conventional noun. Suggestion: use 'handwriting' when contrasting typed vs. handwritten text.

× I own several devices which includes a desktop, a mini PC and a laptop.

✓ I own several devices which include a desktop, a mini PC and a laptop.

Subject 'devices' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'include' rather than singular 'includes.' This is a subject-verb agreement/quantifier issue: ensure verb agrees with plural noun. Suggestion: match verb number to subject: 'devices include.'

× I use the desktop for more demanding tasks like gaming, 3D or video editing.

✓ I use the desktop for more demanding tasks like gaming, 3D modeling or video editing.

The phrase '3D' alone is vague; use the noun '3D modeling' for clarity. This is an issue with word choice rather than pronoun, but listed category closest is pronoun/use of words: clarify incomplete noun phrases. Suggestion: specify '3D modeling.'

× I usually use the mini PC for office work and creative projects that doesn't require rendering.

✓ I usually use the mini PC for office work and creative projects that don't require rendering.

Relative clause refers to plural 'work and creative projects' so the verb should be plural 'don't' not 'doesn't.' Ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses. Suggestion: use 'that don't require.'

× And the laptop is the one I use for meetings, especially because of the good webcam.

✓ The laptop is the one I use for meetings, especially because it has a good webcam.

Original phrasing is understandable but awkward; explicitly stating 'it has a good webcam' clarifies the reason. Use pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'the laptop.' Suggestion: 'because it has a good webcam.'

× I use a desktop more for demanding tasks like gaming, 3D modeling or video editing.

✓ I use the desktop more for demanding tasks like gaming, 3D modeling or video editing.

Consistency: previously the speaker identified 'a desktop' vs 'the desktop.' Using 'the desktop' is clearer because a specific device was mentioned earlier. This improves reference clarity. Suggestion: maintain consistent articles when referring to the same device.

× The mini PC is the one I use for office work like documents and creative projects that doesn't require any rendering.

✓ The mini PC is the one I use for office work like documents and for creative projects that don't require any rendering.

Two issues: the relative clause 'that doesn't require' must agree with plural 'projects' (use 'don't'), and parallel structure improves readability by adding 'for' before 'creative projects.' Suggestion: ensure verb agreement and parallel structure.

× I improve my diaping mainly by practicing everyday.

✓ I improve my typing mainly by practising every day.

Multiple problems: 'diaping' is a typo for 'typing.' 'Practicing' spelling: British English 'practising', American 'practicing' — either is acceptable; choose one consistently. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the adverbial phrase should be 'every day.' Suggestion: use 'practising every day' or 'practicing every day.'

× I type a lot for my job, I write my own stories, I do a lot of computer tasks and this builds speed and accuracy.

✓ I type a lot for my job, I write my own stories, and I do many computer tasks, which builds speed and accuracy.

Run-on sentence and quantifier choice: replace 'a lot of computer tasks' with 'many computer tasks' for correctness. Also join clauses properly and use 'which' to refer back to the whole preceding idea. Suggestion: use proper conjunctions and relative pronouns for clarity.

× I'm also very good at using shortcut keys for a lot of different softwares that I use for work.

✓ I'm also very good at using shortcut keys for a lot of different software programs that I use for work.

'Softwares' is nonstandard; 'software' is uncountable, or use 'software programs.' Use 'software programs' or simply 'software.' Also avoid repeated 'use'; consider 'that I use for work' fine. Suggestion: 'software' or 'software programs.'